|Reviews for If She Lived|
| Aishata chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
| Phenitial chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
Go on please!
| Izzi89 chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
It's good, i like the thought.. but the haze might be nice to keep Yukito confused, but it seems a little bit randome to me.. it's still a good story..
| Rea27 chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
you people and your storries... why i get hocked i will never know but this was good. to bad this couldn't happen in the real story line...
anyway, i would like to say (besides Inuyasha) this is one of the best fics i'v stumbelled along in quit some time. i thank you for writing this and i personally would leave it as a one chapter becasue its such a nice ending as it is
i hope you keep on writing good story's like this cause it and you are now on my fav list! XD
| Meggido720 chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
Its an interesting start, I'm very interested to find out where you're going to go with this. Its not bad for a first start Keep it up.
If I may make a suggestion:
Try to make each chapter a minimum of 3000 words. There are no upper limits, the more words the better!
Good job though I hope that you update soon!