Lovely Story Darling I just love the way it is put together.

The voice of InuYasha is captured beautifully. This one is going in my favorites.

Aw, too cute.

You know who really pisses me off...A person who writes a perfect story...AND DOESNT FINISH IT! Jeez, do I really have to beg to get another chapter...Really though it was perfect story line...damn...why didnt you finish it, you got me all upset now.

Just M for Inuyasha's mouth? damn...

But this was awesome, i loved it :D

My favorite lines were " ,like I mean perfectly," and " That's right, bitch, I'm angry. Go away."

Beautifully written and a great plot (:

THIS is how I imagine Inuyasha! You've captured him perfectly!

An excellent job, truly. A sucker for Inuyasha-Kagome myself, you're a person after my own heart! ;) Easy to read, characterization, grammar... you win on all counts. Keep it going :)

Aw. Aw. Awwwwwwwwwww... That's so cute! 3 At the start when she was likened to Naraku I was like "Whaaat?", but after you started with the skirt I was totally smiling like an idiot. Your writing style was really nice, and I can almost imagine Inuyasha actually saying that- if he said so many words. Really really nice job on this! (claps) Sorta wish that the last scene didn't involve Kagome in near tears, since one of the points Inuyasha was getting at involved her tears... If it was her stroking his ears or something instead... (sighs happily) Anyway, good job on this! 3

Beautiful and funny. I really loved the ending!

Awww! Totally adorable! & so original! Great little one-shot! Good job sweetie! .

I laughed so hard at "That's right, bitch, I'm angry. Go away."

OMG! Keep writing!

sooooo adorable!looooooooved it!