Reviews for White Velvet
poisondart18 chapter 1 . 7/30/2014
primrose chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
There is no greater sex than girl on top of girl pumping each other wildly. Pussy to pussy, clit to clit,no sizoring can beat that,try it. Face to face rocks.
Lulu Lollipop chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
mmm lovely ;)
MexG2 chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
Pure Smut

Loved It
stargaze29 chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
YES! That's all I can say to that. This was your first fic? Definitely bolder than I was. : D Awesome first fic dude. : )
ShadowCub chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
NANA100 chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
wow that was interesting. good job
vampire messenger chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
now if only all of our roomates were alice or bella
Jay-Jay the evil cheetah chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
Alice's thoughts whenwalks in on Bella:OMG, SO FUCKING HOT! MUST FUCK HER NOW!

...Or something like that...great story.
twistarwanabe chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
whoo did it just get hot in here * shifts legs uncomfortably * lol good job keep it up
Fire-alchemist1 chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
I loved it. I got wet myself!:) hahaha
missysaaa.crystal chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
It was good :)
SI chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
Well, I liked it a good amount. As a general horny person (sorry if that creeps you out :D) and lover of yuri, I can say it's certainly up to standard (and my standards are HIGH). It's well written, very few mistakes, oh, and just incredibly sexy. Sooo... keep it up dude, welcome to fun world of FF, I hope to read more of you.