Reviews for You Asked for It
TroubledFangirl chapter 1 . 5/21
Luv it
Alphabetta chapter 1 . 1/26
I read the old version and I think you've done a good job with the update. These two are pure fire and the way they fucked each other suit them quite well. I don't actually ship them that much on a deeper level, but they're both hot and crazy and having casual sex with no feelings involved, just pure enjoyment of pleasure and pain, is something I picture happening between them.
Night-Being chapter 1 . 3/2/2015
*high pitch fan-girl sound* Damn I'm way too old for this shit... but how adorable was this! Cute, cute Deidara! You've turn me into a squealing teenager... not something to be proud of, but what the heck. :) I like how you write and I like how many different pairings you write! Mainly the Akatsuki! Oh the Akatsuki! HidaItaDei is the ultimate hotness! Someone write me a threesome with them! O.O
liemie chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
awww! Deidara is ticklish -
BeautifulDesertFoxglove chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
Really?Rape him with a friggin' hairbrush of all things?
acetwolf94 chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
Nice. I liked it.
kateythemoose chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
hmm the image o,o of the rape
lisa.demonic.angel chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
CAELandTAiyo chapter 1 . 10/19/2011

I love this peiring since Hidan is ... well ... Hidan and Deidara is so cute! and Hot! XD! LUNA! chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
ohmygod i loved this SOOOOOOO MUCH 3333333

soooooooooo hott 3
LatyfeSurLeSora chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
Very enjoyable. I cannot believe you're only 13.
nahcemmy chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
How can this only have 2 REVIEWS? HiDei needs more love...

I can't believe I just found this story. I was so glad to find a HiDei story where Hidan ISN'T calling Deidara a slut and stabbing him. Those may be more in character, but this story was just so damn OCC and sugarcoated with sweetness (not an insult); it definitley satisfied my sweet tooth! 3 You're very good at descriptions and lemon scenes. Hope you write more!
Qwil chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
I can imagine Sasori walking in and being like "HEY GUYS! What's hap-OH GOD MY EYES!" *Runs*

Other than a few spelling mistakes, it's rather good. Felt a bit rushed though. Nice job overall!
skylin chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
hmmm great :D i loved it :D ok it was wonderful also hudan is one of my top 10 favs lol.