Reviews for The End In the Beginning
CountessCora chapter 4 . 5/12/2011
Great chapter, I love Jane with Gabriel, and you write them so skillfully!
CountessCora chapter 3 . 4/30/2011
Love the Jane/Gabe interactions!
CountessCora chapter 2 . 4/30/2011
Great Story! Glad you continued.
inkwheels chapter 2 . 4/24/2011
I'm glad you decided to post this! Would love to read more.
wasu chapter 2 . 4/24/2011
I like it so far
Oracile chapter 2 . 4/24/2011
Nice start, especially establishing a level of anxiety with Hoyt's escape. Please continue :)