Reviews for The Hive
ivanganev1992 chapter 9 . 12/4/2016
CH 9 aND THEY GO TO THE WAVE WITH THE POTENTUALLY DISASTEROUS TEAM 7 .

wILL IT BE WITH SASUKE , OROCHIMARU AND THE HIDDEN ARMY . mOST TOXIN AND EVIL MICROORGANISM WILL BE DISSOLVED NEUTRAELIZED IN ACID AND KUUBI CHAKRA . iDEAS . CORROSIVE JUTSUS ?
ivanganev1992 chapter 7 . 12/4/2016
ch 7

Why are you saying Naruto is bit overpowered knowing ahem Madara . That is good begining army . Anbd they didn't have compleatly chakra to weak chakra . In the other the Qeen herself has and absorbed way more from Kuubi . the ninetails . And Seriously ? Sasuke and Sakura AGAIN ?!
ivanganev1992 chapter 4 . 12/4/2016
ch 4

Well that is alternative . She could talk like human or with telepathy or maybe both in Xeno form . if she got chakra .
ivanganev1992 chapter 2 . 12/4/2016
CH 1 IN THE NEW VERSION IT WAS 40% KITSUNE Hanyo/half demon Heno.
saashi samy chapter 10 . 6/23/2014
i really like the story
JAY QUEEN chapter 10 . 9/23/2013
Please update this is a great book
Zatarra12345 chapter 9 . 8/12/2013
Xenomorph are cool
Trife chapter 10 . 5/22/2012
Ah, cool. you wont hear any complaints from me then. I think authors should not force the pairings for their stories and just go with what feels right and what seems to flow together rather then trying to make a square go in the the triangle's slot so to speak.

Lets see how the new version goes. Plot first pairings can come after that if they fit into it. :)

Trife
HeidiFox chapter 10 . 5/22/2012
Alright, at least you didn't abandon it

Is the pairing gonna be slash? Please tell me it is!
BlazaWolf chapter 10 . 5/22/2012
when the new fic comes out i'll be there to read, enjoy, and review it
Toby860 chapter 9 . 5/21/2012
wow im liking this story sofar. i am voting for you to write a second parallel story where naruto enters into a relationship with the queen. please update this story soon and start working on the other one.
LovelessXHeartlessXSoulless chapter 9 . 3/3/2012
Really enjoying it, it's different, not something i see often... i hope for yaoiness! for main paring that is... although if u decide not to, i would if there was no pairing, i don't generally like reading heterosexual pairings nor Yuri pairings, to the point that i probably couldn't read it, sorry just don't like reading them... not tsaying saying there bad in real life, hecj i'm a girl who has a healthy attraction to boys but when i come on these type of websites i prefer to read stories with no pairings or yaoi...:)

Sorry getting completely of track, really enjoying whole plot so far, i could do with probably more detail in the hive and there mentality..but overall really good, can't wait for next chapter..
a true naruto fan chapter 2 . 2/13/2012
are in to a gay naruto or something if so you are a real bitch
jh831 chapter 9 . 2/8/2012
great story, can't wait for the update
silverwolf310 chapter 9 . 2/7/2012
Great chapter i love this story. Oh love the pairings to can naruto be with sasuke?
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