Reviews for The Rise of the New Order
Shadowdog11 chapter 17 . 9/30/2016
So. Angela's this weird half half mommy thing and Martel seems to know half elf lore that is kept super secret from everyone... But she was raised by an elf and a human? Not a fan of this section of story as it seems super convenient. I'm here for the Delena-Eragon-Arya story 0.o
Shadowdog11 chapter 15 . 9/30/2016
The phrasing for the conversations between Eragon and Arya is weird, and throws off the feeling. So close!
Shadowdog11 chapter 6 . 9/29/2016
Not sure how I feel about skipping the mind-reading on both Martel and Delena. Eragon had to do it when he was their only hope?
Shadowdog11 chapter 5 . 9/29/2016
Hmm... Seems like your throwing another character in will limit the depth of Delena
Shadowdog11 chapter 3 . 9/29/2016
The only thing that seems off is the dialogue. Usually it's a bit more proper, especially regarding the elves, but she is considerably younger so maybe thinking too far into it
Shadowdog11 chapter 2 . 9/29/2016
Interesting choice, making her so young.
Shadowdog11 chapter 1 . 9/29/2016
Nice start. Good point to branch off!
Guest chapter 6 . 9/5/2016
I don't trust her I get a bad feeling about her
High Gaurdian chapter 19 . 11/17/2015
And there ends my enjoyment of the story. I really prefer Eragon/OC stories and there are so few of them. Your choice in who you pair together.
ExRevolution chapter 3 . 10/14/2015
I like this story, however in the three chapters since starting, your grammar or word choice is poor in some cases. Past tense seems to be non existant in most cases when required as seen by the end of the third chapter
Restrained.Freedom chapter 41 . 4/15/2014
Great to see you, and thanks for the mention.
I did put in my votes, though I can't quite imagine what you plan for the crossovers. Whatever you do, let us know by giving us an update... perhaps a A/N in chapter 42
It was fun revisiting the story. ;)
Guest chapter 40 . 11/29/2013
whats the sequel called?
Guest chapter 5 . 4/13/2013
Not Deer's Its Deer. OMG! You Noob
Slytherin Sadist Angel chapter 42 . 4/2/2012
I loved this! I always wanted to make an alternate ending to the series. I'll check out your Time Chronicles series, so stay tuned for my review. I loved your fic, though you almost killed me with some of the cliffhangers. You did amazing!
folding chapter 15 . 12/2/2011
i like the fact that you changed eragons love to delena, it was a good change in the plot
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