Reviews for Eat up, Raphy!
tmntfan4ever chapter 1 . 7/13/2014
that was so freaking cute...
koko chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
haha XD
Sorry Raph,but Mikeys eyes are just too powerfull XD
Banana chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
lol
Miss Panty-bum!?
lilskystar chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
AWWWWWWWWW! Raphael is so well described! Cute cute! Love yer story! Brother moment... Love those!
roguelover321 chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
ah so cute

do more
Pariseiffle chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
haha i can imagine them as tots, so freaking adorable
ItShallBeSo chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
Aargh, have I really not reviewed this until now?

Great story! Yes, I could picture them as toddlers the whole way through.

Aw, poor Raphie, I understand exactly how he feels when he says it's not his fault, like when he broke Mikey's train because he kept driving it over his shell. Although when things similar to that happen to me, I normally hit my brother, who pretends to cry and then my mum tells me off :(

This story is hilarious, when I log in I'll add it to my favourites list, but for now I'll stick to adding it to my list of fanfics that I store on my phone
ATalkingLlama chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
Aw this was so cute and yet so funny! I had a smile on my face the entire time I read it! Poor Raph, stuck playing the baby!

I pictured them as children the entire story! For someone who never wrote a story with characters this young, you did a pretty awesome job! Keep writing, you're really good!
Imatotalfreaksowat chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
*Pfft* Dear lord, you had me literally laughing out loud the entire time. Typically I find "baby-talk" annoying in stories, but I thought you pulled it off wonderfully, and it was an adorable enhancement to the humor of it all. It was so cute, and perfectly in character! Yes, I could picture them as tots the whole time; it was hard not to XD

The entire thing had me laughing and re-reading, but I'm gonna go ahead and say that the part that had me grabbing at my sides the most was;

*Splat*

"SOWWIE, DONNIE!"

*Splat*

"HAHA, LEO!"

A perfect display of the obvious favorites: I'm giggling even as I re-write it XD

I'm really looking forward to the other one-shots, and can't wait until you post them! 8D
AATC and TMNT rocks chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
Great story, I can totally imagine the turtles doing that. Please update this story, you really deserve more reviews than you have on this:)