Reviews for April Shower
tongueofserpents chapter 1 . 2/19
That was something. I enjoyed this story. Chris and Jill is just so perfect for each other.
GOD 2.0 chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
cool story bro
GodOfWisdomAndStories chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
fifty shades of gray is...nowhere near as...erm...hehe not as good as this in my a opinion (checked its reviews out of curiosity but nothing really surprised me) this is better...i'ma go do somethin else now...
LyricAiLove chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
It's a good one shot. However, try expanding on the action but keeping the characters feelings as you have them. It's good that you emphasize how they're interpreting the situation, but with no definite action to accompany it, your beautiful story becomes an inner monologue in the third person.
Little Gem Magnolia chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
This was a really amazing read and I enjoyed it very much. I like how you portrayed Jill here as I too believe Chris would be less likely to make the first move; nice characterization to compliment excellent writing.

Thank you for sharing this.
sakuyavalentine chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
Aw man,

You've reviewed so many of my stories; why haven't I returned the favour? I fail.

Sorry; I usually don't read fan fiction because I haven't found many people who do it well. Glad I was wrong.

I love this. Chris x Jill is the only pairing I really support (I also like Leon x Angela - despite everyone else hating it) so I'm glad to have found a good story about them. WTF is with Chris x Wesker dominating this fandom?

I like the setting for this too; trapped in a car in the rain. Aww!

Keep up the good work 3
kingvampire00 chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
that was so fucking awesome!
Rainfox88 chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
Wow, I totally enjoyed this! Awesome job! And you say you overly abused your backspace button? Ahh, I do that sometimes too lol. Well, I really liked this, so I hope this help eases your uncertainty about it. But I know how that goes. I'll say the same thing about one of my works, but you and many others say its great lol!

The characterizations of Chris and Jill were done perfectly, and the mood...wow! Nothing better for them to get stuck together in the rain!

Personally, I am sick of rain right now. Thunderstorms, floods, hail, tornadoes, etc etc, all April long and unrelenting! I have forgotten what the sun looks like! No wonder I haven't been able to write or update...sigh...

Anyways, I am getting off track again lol. Wonderful, splended job as always! You are one of the best on this sight, and you keep proving that over and over again with each update and new story! :)
Midnight-Moonlight-Gal chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
Wow! Yet another amazing fic created. I really enjoyed it, you write really well. Great job! :)
A Spirit 420 chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
That was a good read! It was hot! Plus very descriptive in detail down to her moaning, the sensation and all of that. The dialogue was just as good too and it was just the right balance between that and the sex that end quote "Somewhere dryer next time"

I actually think that's the best time to cuddle with a woman, make love to her & keep warm rainy nights are the best for that kind of thing. Now I get why they made that song love a rainy night haha :P

Good job!
Ravenlaughter chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
Naughty you. Another smut fic?...tut tut. lol

Even though your story "origami heart" is still my fave in that department, you did a great job on this.

Now if you want to make me a perfectly happy poodle (don't ask), all you need to write at some point is a Wesker/Jill fic of the same kind and then I'll be your slave forever.

;)
Naoko Mint chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
You make Jill so beautiful! And yeah, of course Chris has eyes for her. ;)

Amazing work as always! 3
Chirika chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
Yeah Chris is totally an ass :)) . I mean... you see, such a pretty and extremely beautiful Jill Valentine who has been beside him for almost over 10 years, always cares and sacrificed herself for him,but he cannot pop out three simple words that she and every fan want to hear :3. Sometimes I wonder that Chris's gay LOL (Wesker this, Wesker that, just kidding P ).

Maybe Chris overthought too much about destroying their long time friendship to make a move, so Jill has to do that lol. That's why I love Jill very much, she's strong, beautiful, can handle everything by herself and not to ashamed to show how much she cared for Chris

Nice work Yuna :)
Ultimolu chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
You write sex very, very well. Don't be disappointed in this; it was awesome. :3
sophie623 chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
Hi Ya,

This is very enjoyable. It shows their personalities, pretty similar to what I thought they would be. You know, due to their partnership, they were trying to hold their feelings and at last crossed the line because they loved each other too much.

Nice work. Support you.

Looking forward to your next piece of art.

Sophie
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