Reviews for The Little Blue Pill
Singing Silverwings chapter 9 . 3/15
What a great story! If the show had a different rating, I'd say I could see this being an episode on TV. Humorous, in character, brilliant. Thanks for writing and sharing it with us!
MrsLJG5 chapter 9 . 6/29/2014
I really enjoyed your story and thought it was really creative about the 'blue pill.'

In one of your chapters, you challenged a scenario with the blue pill. I'm thinking about it!

Thanks for the inspiration!
VG LittleBear chapter 9 . 4/21/2014
Well told and very funny! But I think I'll handle it better in the context of Tony having a nightmare! Anything to avoid thinking this was for real ... yes, I do realize this is fiction, LOL.
Thanks and cheers!
Theresa F chapter 9 . 3/26/2014
Since you read and reviewed my story I guess I should leave a review for you on this great little gem of a humorous story you wrote here... I loved it!
Would make a great plot for an episode if they ever would let Gibbs and Abby get together 8-)
I hope you plan on doing some mote writing, I know for me it is a great escape gets my mind away from the ups and downs of life and gives me purpose.
Have a great day 8-D

Theresa F
Baby Fawn chapter 9 . 2/13/2013
well those little blue pills are known to pack a punch for what i heard cracks up... real good
Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
I'm thinking that you don't like Tony because how angry Gibbs was to him.
Guest chapter 8 . 7/22/2012
Why was Gibbs so mean to Tony? It's not fair. They were both consenting adults to what they did. Gibbs shouldn't have hit Tony hard on the head for what two consenting adults do when they are together. And he shouldn't have made him go to the lecture. It's not Tony's fault that, that woman went crazy for what they did.
DCIPHOENIX chapter 2 . 4/6/2012
Ah... So you'd like to challenge myself and other fanfiction-ers

to come up with versions of that blue pill could wreck

havoc for a certain silver-haired ex Gunnery Sergeant? Hmm? ;)

...i wouldn't mind taking up that challenge! *throws gauntlet down*

I must've skipped by on reading that when I read this the 1st time, all those months ago... ;)

...btw congrats for continuing your writing after all the grief you've had! :)xxx
JMK758 chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
"rule 12… rule 12… rule 12… rule … rule… to hell with it! Rule 51" Wonderful! However, Abby moved so fast I would have liked her to draw it out. I couldn't see her making a move without teasing/tormenting him first.

The cup, definitely an "OH NO!" moment. But giving Tony the blue pill is sort of like giving a fish water.
gotgoats chapter 4 . 1/25/2012
I just had to reread a couple of parts. And tell you how awesome you did the dialogue between Ducky and Abby as Abby is trying desperately to dodge the Duck! And Tony making his desk into a crime scene was priceless.

Is there going to be a sequel coming? Unexpected results? *wiggles eyebrows*
gotgoats chapter 9 . 1/25/2012
Heeheehe I've been reading your story, and giggling my whole way though it! Very well done!
Talldi chapter 9 . 10/2/2011
I really enjoyed the story. You are very talented and should continue to write! You really hit Gibbs on the button! ;)di
WithTheGrain chapter 9 . 9/8/2011
OMG! I just found this story and read it straight through. This was fantastic. Wonderful humor! The storyline was very creative and your writing is incredible! You captured the characters so well! Really enjoyed this and really hope you continue to write and share. Thank you!
DCIPHOENIX chapter 9 . 8/16/2011
Woo! *claps* that was really very good! Had the ncis episode-y feel. I loved it, read it all in one go. :) well done!

I hate that it ended and am minimally confused that they're in love... Abby said no strings? I would've just liked to see Abby helping out with his 'problem' then their relationship returning to normal... Anyways, good idea for your story, very visual. Good work.:)xxx
missyAn chapter 9 . 6/25/2011
Thank you for the great story,I really enjoyed it. I would like to see you write some more. Sorry for your loss.
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