|Reviews for Jackpot!|
| LissyGudiya chapter 1 . 5/4/2014
Best story EVER! :D
| Asteral chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
WOW! So funny and crude! Me subscribibg to you right now!PLEASE WRITE MORE THINGS!
| TwWereWolf chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
THE CUTENESS. THE CUTENESS MADE MY INSIDES BLEED.:'D
I lol'd through this entire thing! Good Job!;)
...Poor poor Sparda...
| IDintFall4ULoveTrippedMe chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
| Figgs chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
I absolutely loved how you portrayed the younger Dante and Vergil. It was a very cute story and I like how you tied Dante's bad habit of gambling (and losing) into the meaning of "Jackpot!" The side thoughts by Dante were much appreciated as well.
The second part of the story was rather awkward- with the sexual nature of Sparda. Seeing as Vergil strived to be his father, if we look at Vergil's personality, I doubt his father had that kind of "drive". Eva also seemed a little less motherly than I would have expected. But maybe that's just me. :)
Over all, a very sweet story. And very well done for a first fanfic!
| BlueSapphireWriter chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
Your first story out! D
Write faster! (If you're not done with your long one before school starts...)
| emilia chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
Bra Valeria! men du ska inte skriva sånt här! du ska fortsätta på den rätta berättelsen!
men bra skrivet ändå