|Reviews for Mercy|
| KatasaurusRex chapter 2 . 1/18
I like the idea of this.. I made it thru the previous story hoping since the sequel had taken a bit it would be BETA'd and have more of a flow.. I would like to point out that you even have incorrect spelling of your own last name in your link to your book.. I'm not trying to be harsh, but using Smashwords doesn't mean you sold a book.
I urge you to take this down, find a beta and polish it. I noticed your Smashwords reviews said the same.. Please, we are only trying to help you as a community. I would love to see this rise to become something much more powerful.
| Guest chapter 8 . 10/7/2015
Are u kidding y is HE NOT ROTTING IN HELL
| rochelleross56 chapter 16 . 7/4/2015
Very good story good job I can't wait to see what happens next...
| rochelleross56 chapter 15 . 7/4/2015
Wow its over but a few are lost ...
| rochelleross56 chapter 14 . 7/4/2015
Wow what a battle I am glad Jakes back I all be happy when everyone is back at their own homes even Sam...
| rochelleross56 chapter 13 . 7/4/2015
Wow what a time for her to have dreams... She was very shocked to know the truth but still how will she be able to be with Edward she would have a hard time trusting him again and this will harm the relationship... Paul have his issues but he loves bella and he will do anything for her so do Edward but for his own reasons and that won't be healthy for bells... If it was up to me I would have to say Paul...
| rochelleross56 chapter 12 . 7/4/2015
I hope jazz get to them in time...hmm I like the way alida think and jazzvand Dallas can help...
| rochelleross56 chapter 11 . 7/4/2015
Wow I hope the meet up its the only way things will work...
| rochelleross56 chapter 10 . 7/4/2015
Wow that bella is a tough but she been there so she may be of some help to them I hope all goes well with jazz plan and none of the wolves are hurt in the trap they are about to walk into...my fav part is Bella's love for everyone and strength to face anything even the vamp laws...poor Jake he really did not think this through.,
| rochelleross56 chapter 9 . 7/4/2015
Let the fun begin...
| rochelleross56 chapter 8 . 7/4/2015
Wow what mess...
| rochelleross56 chapter 7 . 7/4/2015
Go bells u have Paul right where u want him lol...
| rochelleross56 chapter 6 . 7/4/2015
Well that was fun lol...
| rochelleross56 chapter 5 . 7/4/2015
Yay they are relaxing and having a good time I am happy for them they really need this I have a feeling there are things to come...
| rochelleross56 chapter 4 . 7/4/2015
Well they re home finally ... Poor bells I hope she don't get a cold...