Reviews for The One Where Jim and Spock Have Sex During Shore
777angeloflove chapter 1 . 1/3
HOT! HOT! HOT!
SapphireSecret chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
There is a lot of smut out there, but this certainly of a much higher caliber than all the rest. Good job, it felt like you managed to avoid cliches, as well as silly, snort-worthy words other people feel the need to write. You also managed to stay in character while writing this incredibly sexy story, and you provided a bit of a background as well without narrating it, both of which are impressive. The only thing I have to point out is that I'm not entirely sure about the purpose of the page break in the middle of your story. I could be that it signifies the complete blanking of Jim's thoughts, but I was also left wondering if it was a typo. Overall, very skillfully written!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
So this is litterly my favorite fanfiction ever! Smut or not. This is just so well written, and I felt that it was very in character...even if they acted differently. I loved it!
Spam6467 chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
Beautiful; an oasis of porn in a desert of site-restricted teases. XD
Ishtar205 chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
Thanks for that story ;b !
Gooieduck1224 chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
why must you write such things, these are bad for my heart
ChessKeeper chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
Very hot.
Arnyri chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
! *brainsplodey* !

This is INCREDIBLE! Hot enough to melt the brain and turn it into a pile of molten smut-induced mush! _ THANK you for sharing!
Anime Princess chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
Hot loving!
RaveLDG chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
Wow! That was long, hard, sweaty, just the right amount of everything. And I prefer this Spock over the one that doesnt really know what he is doing. Awesome job!
Uke Incognito chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
Wow... dirty and raunchy and bad in the best way possible. I chewed my lip red while reading this, thinking about all the naughty things that could happen.

I only had one problem. I don't know if it was intentional since it didn't coinside with the direction of the story, but the paragraph that starts with "Jim can't control the flood of images..." throws me for a loop. It seems kinda out of place since Jim is practically gagging for a thorough reaming.

I had to reread the paragraph before that and then skip over it so as not to be confused.

I don't know what you'll do about my observation, if anything at all, but your story as a whole was very entertaining.
lirael030 chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
H
Aetheriata chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
Ahhh...

Yeah... a lot of kinks here...

Wehw...

My first day in the fandom and I kind of seem to be getting all the right stuff...

Jesus...
aaliyah1963 chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
Damn THAT WAS hot I mean REALLY! I follow you on LJ I am half_vulcan there. If you posted this on LJ I obviously did not get to it yet. Whew girl I need ice like STAT! I love ALL your work and just for good measure I will say it again DAMN!

LL&P \\/-
Empress of Fools chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
...that was seriously, ridiculously hot. I think my mind has been blown. You're clearly a genius when it comes to writing K/S smut. Long may your reign over this fandom continue! Now I need to go take a cold shower...
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