Reviews for Thunderer
Monster King chapter 5 . 5/21
Great story I really liked it a shame that you gave up on it.
BerserkNemesis chapter 5 . 3/1
TheLightFairyHearts chapter 5 . 2/13
Love it can't wait for more
alicia7788 chapter 5 . 1/13
ArghThePirate chapter 5 . 12/16/2017
Hey! Great work! Please update, I would love to read more! Thanks and please keep up the great work!
Guest chapter 5 . 11/26/2017
Wow, you made the ANBU even MORE pathetic then canon AND I DIDN'T THINK THAT WAS POSSIBLE! (seriously I don't even see the need for an invasion, with sasuke and kakashi acting the way the did, and anbu not being able to do anything, it's kinda obvious that the village is ALREADY imploding, all by itself). Personally I'm shocked the hokage didn't die from EMBARRASSMENT from all these WEAKNESSES being shown to ALL the other nations! Even DANZO would be ANGRY with the two pests! (and by angry, I mean HOMICIDAL)

Also you made the finals one-sided because, THEY ARE one-sided in canon... seriously, temari and garaa and THAT'S IT, that's ALL that made it to the finals, EVERYONE else was konoha. Can you IMAGINE the Olympics if ONLY one country was represented?... The world would have them on a political CHOPPING BLOCK!
Guest chapter 4 . 11/26/2017
How exactly is garaa ANY threat at all against someone that can control the EARTH (aka: dirt, stone, mud, magma, SAND)? (and that's WITHOUT the hammer)
Guest chapter 4 . 11/26/2017
You know it always cracked me up, if the hokage is too old for his job and everybody knows it, what does danzo hope to accomplish? They're the SAME AGE (I looked it up), it would be trading one OLD FOSSIL for another OLD FOSSIL! (the diaymo should laugh right in his wrinkled face if it was brought up, "no, you are FAR too old for the position, find someone younger, or I will appoint a member of my own staff until you find a younger candidate.")

Oh yes, the cask of endless winters, because the juubi and the rinnegan, zero-tails, a "real" demon, and "moon aliens" aren't ENOUGH world-ending events coming up, (not to mention 11 s-ranks, when naruto can BARELY handle another gennin)...we gotta have ANOTHER for some unknown reason. I find this superfluous.

Didn't Thor tell naruto to "honor" Mijolnir?.. Not throw it around like a sack of potatoes... (drops it on the ground, throws it onto the bed..etc). It has IMMENSE powers of it's own, gave naruto a nearly STUPID amount of power (power of a GOD.. not like pein's DELUSIONS), plus near-immortality, I'd think he'd show a LITTLE more reverence. (that and it has limited sentience plus is a part of his SOUL now). As for kakashi, in canon there is NO "councils" and the 2 elders (danzo was fired, which most ff authors either don't know or forget) have NO POWER... but anyway, kakashi is still A HORRIBLE teacher. I'd think Minato would be angry, depressed, disappointed and disgusted with kakashi all rolled into one.

Also with kyuubi calling the "previous" thor, naruto's ancestor? That doesn't ring true... "he" was a memory, a life-force, stored in mijolnir, when naruto was found worthy, "he" bonded with naruto. Thus, "he" IS naruto, not an ancestor, not a possessing spirit, or separate in ANY way... THEY ARE the same person! Kinda like a "soul fusion", the elemental nations HAVE NOTHING like it, in fact, I've never seen it done outside of comics (that is to say, never done by manga or anime).

However, all that said, this is one of the best Thor crossovers I've read here on FF. Great job.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/25/2017
Thor has been hit by an ENRAGED HULK and no bones broke, there is NO WAY kabuto messed up naruto that bad! He's also able to MOVE "faster then the lightning he commands" so yeah, kabuto EVEN at full power would be in slow-mo. AND finally, with mijonir thor can heal not only ANY injury (even if something IS powerful enough to sever a limb... WHICH has got to be COSMIC level, he can grow it back) but also fix his clothes! Tired?.. Thor has IN CANON fought for MONTHS (literally months) non-stop...Without sleep, rest, food or water!. .
Guest chapter 2 . 11/25/2017
It was a BLUFF, IF orochimaru COULD do everything he threatened, he already WOULD have done it, I'd have called his bluff, canceled the exams and thrown garaa out on his butt!
Guest chapter 5 . 11/15/2017
THOR is immortal, I know that's hard to wrap your head around but 1,000 years later, I'm talking EMPIRES turned to DUST, people wont even REMEMBER names... He'll still be as old as he is now..SasUKE seems like a petulant BABY! Orochimaru and his schemes seem LAUGHABLE... And tobi/obedito/madara... A JOKE! (he's far more powerful then ALL OF THEM combined)
Guest chapter 5 . 11/15/2017
THOR is immortal, I know that's hard to wrap your head around but 1,000 years later, I'm talking EMPIRES turned to DUST, people wont even REMEMBER names... He'll still be as old as he is now... ALL of this is STUPID.
Guest chapter 5 . 11/15/2017
ALL the "bad guys" are kinda PATHETIC, we got pein, who is duped from the get go and is so delusional you GOTTA LAUGH AT HIM. Obideo who wants his date back so bad, when he could just summon her and be done with it... Orochi who wants the uchiha body for what 3 years? Then he has to jump so what's the point?... Danzo who wants to be hokage?.. He'd AT THE MOST reign 5 years.. HE'S OLDER THEN DIRT!...ALL OF THEIR DREAMS SEEM SO STUPID!
Guest chapter 5 . 11/15/2017
A lot of things escapes authors ideals... THOR/Naruto is GAIEA'S child meaning sand/rock/stone he can command with a THOUGHT... As well as trees/nature... His hammer is NOT the SOURCE of his powers, it's a TOOL to use them. Although in this incarnation, maybe not, WHEN NARUTO picked up mijolnir... he BECAME him, their souls became ONE... No thor, no naruto...ONE 's a GOD like the LAST god on a world that doesn't HAVE gods... Even pein who THINKS he is a god, is kinda WEAK against thor who ACTUALLY is a a GOD!(nageto is really just a cripple in a wheelchair!)
Guest chapter 4 . 6/6/2017
Actually, from what I have read in fanfics, the hokage is ALWAYS apologizing to naruto, in fact he's done it often enough that the words have lost ANY meaning whatsoever. I never understood why the hokage just doesn't have the ENTIRE council quietly ASSASSINATED, I mean for the most part they're ALL civilians so it would be easy to kill each and every single one of them in a single night. (and it's KINDA A VILLAGE FULL OF ASSASSINS!) Also they APPARENTLY do NOTHING of ANY consequence.. So their death would DO NOTHING to the village (like when the uchiha died... NOTHING AT ALL changed in the village.. They just weren't IMPORTANT).
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