Reviews for The Tormented Doll
augmentedfourth chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
Oh good, I was wondering how/why Siren got to Sage Isle.

I really liked the idea of the recorded message Orakio left. If Laya left one for her sister, it makes complete sense for Orakio to have done the same.

Mieu and Siren not getting along was interesting, though I suppose that not everyone in the same army has to like each other. The running theme of Adan and Gwyn being the descendants of both Orakio and Laya was used well here again, nicely done. I also liked the inclusion of Siren's final dialogue from the game and you did a good job portraying his reaction to finding out everything he's been "feeling" for the past 1000 was based on his misconceptions.