Reviews for Awakening
BlackCatNeko999 chapter 1 . 12/9/2014
This sure was interesting. And really good. What can I say beside that I liked it.
joanhello chapter 1 . 4/19/2014
Did I ever mention how much this rocks? The deep love you convey without ever using the word "love", the intensity, the depth, all the stuff that's so normal in real relationships and so rare in porn, you get serious points for presenting it, and for presenting it so well. Thank you.
Allendra chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
Really beautiful. Touching and romantic. :)
roseredautumn chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
I definitely like your version of Megamind's anatomy- it makes a certain amount of sense, and I like that it is so unconventional.
MayDayGirl-Save-Our-Ships chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
Oh man! This was amazing! Again, well written, something that can be so hard to find.

I really like the idea of this one,and it explores so much about megamind and about their relationship. Btw, I'm wondering where the whole 'he's sensitive at the back of his neck' thing got started. I might be wrong, but I think I've seen a couple different authors mention that. I mean, it makes sense with his high collars and such, but I was wondering who came up with it. Kinda like his fanon name Syx that everyone uses now. xD

Anyway, I love it!

Shrine
Scarlet-Frost chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Oh, my my my. That was beautiful. :) I like how you described all kinds of new ideas and aspects of our blue hero- nice job with Roxanne's parts. This was a very pleasant read.
FearandLoathingXIX chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
This is a daring project to attempt, but I must say VERY well done. Handled like a real pro, sexy without being tastless, romantic without being awkward. I really liked it 3
Nonesane chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
That was so many levels of hot I can even begin to explain! From the neck-holding to the very unique yet believable take on alien genitalia: A
Phenixia Sama chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
Different and interesting.
Auua Ytjoml chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
Dal,

You wrote "that the patterns on Megamind's body are glands of some sort, vestigial organs from a time when the adults of his species bore live young."

Are you suggesting that his species don't bear live young? or am I mis interpreting this?

Auua
Ravyn13 chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
Wow. Are you sure you've ever written this type of fic before?

:)

I have read a few fics of this nature with these charicters, and most just assume he is just like-or very close to-human males. I really like this theory. It's very creative and believeable. Really great work! :)
Nora Salisbury chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
Interesting ... unique concept for "alternative" sexual organs. Good descriptions of her work at foreplay too.
zabc chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
wow, just. wo. i'm blushing so much right now. the piece is both sensual and intrigueing..piqueing both my curiousity an by..uh..something something *mutter* I like your take on the interspecies anatomy and how they can both find pleasure depspite not nessisarily being tab A into slot B compatable. two thumbs up.
THE female dog chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
i like it. your one of the few who actually take into account that megamind is an alien, and as such may have different 'bits', but i love how you made it so that he and roxanne can still be 'together', sure not in the usual sense, but that should be expected. keep up the good work, love your imagination, don't ever let it die
Madhatter45 chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
I loved the narrative, and appreciate that you actually sat down and thought about the characters before writing this. So many people don't, and its one of the most important tasks when building a story about loveable characters in something as sensitive as a PWP. You did not fall to cheese, or clumsy flowery language/dialogue. You made me believe this is a possibility, and I thank you!

-Madhatter45
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