|Reviews for The Balcony|
| bubblesfreak chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
I tried to read this but the fact that the sentances dont line up with the little paragraphs really bothers me.
| Random-Anime-Girl chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
You know, for a first time sex fic, you did admirably well :) I myself have only slightly dabbled in writing my own, but I have read...*cough* a, um, few. You did exceptionally well, my only real criticism is that there were few words or sounds passing between the two, also to have someone either re-read, or have your self scan over the story, just for a few minor spelling mistakes. Out of 10, I rate this an 8 :3 Kudos!
| tori chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
this was amazing! i usually dont read ron/draco, but you did a really good job for a first timer! i liked the twist ending, and i think you should do more slash (;
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
that was quite good i never would have thought it herms thogh good first try hope to see more
| monkey2397 chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
i love your story! Poor Hermione... but she's such a perv :3 lmao watching ron and draco having sex, she's a peeping tom lol xD and keep up the good work its really good :D
| Silvertoungue-Prongs chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
Wow... That was good, really good. Realy really good.
| MalcolmBaddock chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
I deeply understand. I do. You have done very good job.
| CJNova chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
Aww :) I feel sorry for Hermione now... You should write one about her and how she finds happiness! Great sex scene though (I'm not used to reading them.) xXx