Reviews for The Fall
asasi chapter 5 . 8/16/2016
It's a good story, I hope you have the time to write the next chapter. I really looking forward to it :)
Dalisay08 chapter 5 . 8/14/2016
can you kindly continue this, I wanna know what sasuke want to talk about, I believe its not just about curiosity, something else that has something to do with madara, and why is hinata living on her own...? plsss I like you to continue this, this story is beautiful
Guest chapter 5 . 6/5/2016
What exactly is it that Sasuke want to talk to Hinata about? And how damaged is her relationship with the rest of the Hyugas?

Please can you update...its been a year already
Guest chapter 2 . 6/5/2016
I hate it when a parent do that...its a pity Saskue didn't tell him to give it to him.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/5/2016
Nice...not bad
rockyourlove chapter 1 . 3/17/2016
re read your story again and i realise hw nice your writing style is. cant wait for the story to continue :)
Guest chapter 5 . 11/29/2015
Ah I'm so curious for an update! Well done!
It seems Hinata left her family to live her life her own way,but she's struggling? Hmmmm

I love your work so much. It's so relatable!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/29/2015
I love it! What a cute beginning :)
Veraozao chapter 5 . 4/14/2015
love it, kiss
misao97 chapter 5 . 4/6/2015
I really like your story so far! Very cute! Can't wait for more! So please update soon haha! Gambatte!
Djomar chapter 5 . 4/2/2015
I hope that Sasuke will say something soon
rockyourlove chapter 5 . 3/30/2015
Ack! You shouldn't go for any more hiatus. Don't go mia again I'm very intrigued by your story and sasuhina.

Try updating consistently? :-) it's a good habit

Thanks for writing! Can't wait to read more!
rockyourlove chapter 2 . 3/30/2015
Eeeepp! So cute.

The first chapter where hinata was so engrossed in her book and sat of his lap I was like oh no and then wait cutely awkward situations is the perf beginning for sasuhina. ;)

Characterisation is A
Fher34 chapter 5 . 3/29/2015
I have the feeling this is going to be good
Lol, im more fond of stories with longer chapters but i think u r doing ok
Hope u update soon and yay, sasuhina (:
Fher34 chapter 1 . 3/29/2015
Lol, nice introduction between those two
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