Reviews for The Fall
Starcakes chapter 4 . 9/26/2014
Oh oh! This story intrigues me so much! I think it's because of the style of your writing. How it's so clean. I can't wait to read more of the upcoming chapters of this story. I'm hooked!
The interaction between Sasuke and Hinata is just the way I imagined whenever I think of how Sasuke's arrogance and Hinata's subtle personality of not caring unless you're important to me haha.
I love it! I'm so happy I found this story of yours! I will be faithfully waiting and wishing for the completion of this story! :))
aurora0914 chapter 4 . 1/26/2014
wow... this was so... short. You havent updated in a couple of years... I see.
Please update soon.
I want to get to know more of the plot, and more of Sasuke falling in love.
Your writing style is curious.
Update soon!
Narutoimagine01 chapter 4 . 1/25/2014
Why did you stop writing this? !? This is sooooooo good! If only you'd continue...
kandita chapter 4 . 1/20/2014
Well I do like what I've read so far and if like to read more. Also, why'd Fugaku even bother to bring up Madera name. I mean this can only lead to nothing good
kandita chapter 3 . 1/20/2014
U know I'm a bit curious why all story including this one can never seem to put Hinata in her rightful role as the next leader of her clan or co...she's not as weak as she may give off. And, I for one know that she's be a way better leader than Hanabi who is trained to be a replica of their a**hole dad. I am just so dissapointed that its portrayed that way for her and its quiet upsetting
Guest chapter 4 . 10/27/2012
Buah! It was getting so good! Update soon! I'm looking out for it!
SASUHINA ALL THE WAY BUDDY chapter 4 . 6/24/2012
Guest chapter 4 . 6/3/2012
Don't use the term orbs. It's overused, cliche, and doesn't conjure up a good image. Anyway, this story is interesting so far. Not entirely original, but it's good in its own right. Don't go changing the story just because I said it's not original. I would like to see how this develops and what sort of conflicts you'll be throwing in their way. Good day, ma'am
kenpachi.M chapter 4 . 5/20/2012
I really like this story I am curious as to how sasuke and her relationship will develop

please update soon :D
blackfeather9 chapter 4 . 5/1/2012

Saki-Hime chapter 4 . 4/22/2012
Aww he's nice, but maybe he's just doing it cuz he wants to talk to her. Very good, update soon.
KaoruZhinLee chapter 4 . 4/18/2012
Update! Update! I'm completely into this story and can't wait to find out what happens next. :)
sweetgums chapter 4 . 4/18/2012
Seems really interesting so far. You've managed to convey Sasuke's personality quite well, I think, at least in this kind of setting. I hope you'll continue soon!
Veraozao chapter 4 . 4/18/2012
i love it
ChikiroKiryuu chapter 4 . 4/15/2012
This story is cute :) n I'm curious now too! What does she mean by Ex? Excited for the next chapter! XD

Your Lovely Reader,

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