Reviews for Untouchable
Vaderling chapter 3 . 7/26/2015
Hmm, interesting that Satine showed up! I liked the conversation at the end.
Vaderling chapter 2 . 7/26/2015
Looks like you're setting up an itneresting dynamic between Kali, Stonewall, and Obi-Wan.
Vaderling chapter 1 . 7/26/2015
I read your other fics a long time ago but never got around to this one. Wonderful beginning!
skygawker chapter 21 . 7/17/2014
Just wanted to drop by and say you write very believable OCs. This is an interesting and well-written story.
Crazyguy170 chapter 5 . 7/17/2014
Looks like the plot is really starting to pick up. Good job with Crest's POV.
Crazyguy1701 chapter 4 . 7/17/2014
Kali is a really interesting character. Good chapter!
Crazyguy1701 chapter 3 . 7/17/2014
Love your characterization of Obi-Wan.
Crazyguy1701 chapter 2 . 7/17/2014
Another good chapter :)
Crazyguy1701 chapter 1 . 7/17/2014
This looks interesting keep it up
Skyguy248 chapter 8 . 6/19/2014
Oh, poor everyone :( very evocative.
Skyguy248 chapter 7 . 6/19/2014
Oh, the angst. Very good!
Skyguy248 chapter 6 . 6/19/2014
I don't think I've mentioned this yet, but I really like your OCs—they're very well-rounded and interesting!
Skyguy248 chapter 5 . 6/19/2014
Man, there's so much going on in this fic, never a slow moment. Good work!
Skyguy248 chapter 4 . 6/19/2014
Love the dream sequence in this chapter!
Skyguy248 chapter 3 . 6/19/2014
Keep up the good work!
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