Reviews for Authority: The Cold Equations |
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![]() ![]() I know literally NOTHING about Midnighter and Apollo except that they're a couple and they're superheroes, but I absolutely LOVE this story! Just gotta ignore that insensitive comment somewhere below me… that guy's just plain rude, and knows nothing about creative juices and good writing. |
![]() ![]() I like this. A lot. Actually, I read it twice. I don't agree with some of the odds stated (the possibility of him getting cancer from the sun...) but the forest for the trees you know. I just like it. Short, simple, sweet. |
![]() ![]() Really loved this piece. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this piece. It was very succint yet beautiful. Please do more on the Midnighter and Apollo relationship. |
![]() ![]() Very interesting take on how Midnighter's enhancements might work against him. I love the last 2 lines. Tnanks for the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh god, the end's really haunting. ...If you die, I won't outlast you... |
![]() ![]() What? The least you can do, if you are going to write an obtuse, pointless and just plain bad "story", is NOT steal the title of a great SF story. Just couldn't get that "creativity" flowing a little more, could you? Try harder next time; try harder not to submit a story. |
![]() ![]() very moving... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I loved it. Very Midnighter. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I so like your fanfics! They always have an impact on me. Also I wanted to ask you if you are gonna update your web pages, including the Magneto one that I love! Keep up your amazing work! GiniaTM |
![]() ![]() ![]() Original and fantastic! A great bit of fic crammed into a short length. Major kudos! (got to it from Nyarth's site, btw) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Your Midnighter spends a lot of time with these fun obsessions! This is so cool because in the comics, you see him hanging around in the background of scenes looking grim, and you just *know* he's calculating such horrible odds. Also a damn good reason why he can't just be with Apollo and be happy. Very well written. can't fault it _ N |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very, very good. Original in the idea, excellent in the execution. A convincing insight with an unusual twist to it. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I agree, you got Midnighter's voice just about perfect here. And I can definitely see this being just what was going through his head at the beginning of #8, for one. By the way, I recognize your name from a couple of other fandoms *g* and I've always liked your fic. Didn't know you had written Authority, though! Cool, cool ) |
![]() ![]() This was the best Midnighter fic I've ever read, you got the voice perfect. |