Reviews for Breath Taking
Del3t3d chapter 1 . 2/21/2016
So intense! Loved it!
malexfaith chapter 1 . 2/9/2016
Less then 800 words. Wow. Powerful little piece. Captured the moment beautifully. Thanks heaps for sharing
aurorawinter chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
This is beautifully written. I wish I experience this in real life.
connyx chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
You didn't finished this one yet.. right?
Nah I'm joking.
A sweet nice short piece. Sensitive. Enjoyable.
DarXe chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Very sensual.
j9tigger chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
I think I held my breath while reading that fic.
muderocksmyworld chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
Mm-Burnt-Toast-mM chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
I really, really like the way this fic was written, describing everything that she was feeling. I liked it a lot!
RestlessSoul03 chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
i love this!
Googlemouth chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
You're right, that IS a good reason for needing to catch one's breath. :) But then, I never doubted it. I have to do that, for this reason, on a regular basis (Thanks, Mrs. Googlemouth!).
Willow008 chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
I like, uber sweet.

I wan2 chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
Without hesitation or protest

Without fear or apprehension

Without doubt or resistance

It was almost too much to handle. It wasn't enough.

"You've stolen my breath away,"

Poetry in motion, amazing and so, so poignant... You've managed to capture the moments following a kiss so realistically. :P
Drumchik chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
This was so beautiful, I really loved it. Great work :)
LittleGayMonster chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
Sexy i loved it. I can't help but love good gay stuff. This was well done and kinda like prose.
dolfins35 chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
Without hesitation or protest/ Without fear or apprehension/ Without doubt or resistance-Don't we all wish this is how it would be.

Loved the opposition of word choices: powerful and weak / too much too handle and wasn't enough. That paints a really strong picture in my head.

That was really hot and all they're doing is kissing. I'm sure there wouldn't be any protests if they decided to do it right there in the parking lot either.

It's amazing how you can say so much with so few words so perfectly.

I'm going to steal your line...Everything about it was right.

We need to rant more often, if one-shots like this are the
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