Reviews for A Partner's Prerogative |
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star trek nutcase chapter 2 . 4/28/2011 This is freakin' awesome - so smooth and well-written - you are a very very accomplished writer. And no one would ever suspect this was your first H5O fic. You definitely handled the characters with great finesse and in sync with the show itself. Your writing reminded me of a very well written novel, rather than simply a scene or two from a favorite show. It was so replete with all the wonderful descriptions and adjectives that elevate good writing to great. Hope you will continue with more H5O fic. |
Nana56 chapter 2 . 4/27/2011 Aw, Steve. I could just see him lying there and being worried about Danny. :D Such a sweet guy! Very nice chapter. :) |
alwaysateen chapter 2 . 4/27/2011 Welcome to the Hawaii Five-0 fandom! So glad you decided to join, well they're hard to resist are they, lolll. Great story, it's awesome to see all the worries of Danny for Steve when he start punching the police officer who was a lousy backup. He really like Steve even if he will never admit it to his partner. And hurt Steve stories are my favorite so it was even better. Hope you gonna write some more. :) |
linda.watsonhines.com chapter 2 . 4/27/2011 love this! A great story. |
kimber1461 chapter 2 . 4/27/2011 What a wonderful story! I LOVE the voices you give Steve and Danno. You have captured their personalities and relationship beautifully! |
Ali64 chapter 1 . 4/27/2011 This was just brilliant from start to finish and I was so glad to see that you had contributed a story to the growing list of Hawaii 5-0 fanfics.I've noticed that a lot of Supernatural fanfic authors have now dabbled in the Hawaii 5-0 world...and it's not hard to understand why! Steve & Danny are incredible characters and you managed to capture their voices perfectly, though Danny is the prominent figure in this managed to capture Danny's worry for his reckless partner with words and actions and then Steve's realisation that he had frightened his partner was equally , please! Ali |
Morganeth Taren'drel chapter 2 . 4/27/2011 Beautifully done! You've done just as wonderful a job with this first foray as you do with your Supernatural stories, I loved it! |
mjels chapter 2 . 4/27/2011 love it |
mjels chapter 1 . 4/27/2011 love it |
elemental-sparky chapter 2 . 4/27/2011 So I'm pretty sure my favourite line was '"From now on I'll tell people I answer to God, the governor and Danno."' lol, just great. Hope you write more in the H50 fandom. It is afterall, writers like yourself, Faye Dartmouth and geminigrl that have set this high standard that I hold other fanfic writers to. :) |
adiltam chapter 2 . 4/27/2011 Followed you over from SPN. Great work and look forward to reading more of your stories. All the best. |
tiggrr527 chapter 2 . 4/26/2011 Absolutely LOVE this story! Characters right on, owies and angst and of the course the humor between our guys! I had tears after the copier bit. Partly because I can see that whole scene and partly because I work with a similiar copier! Thank you SOOOOO much for sharing! |
dimensions-in-space chapter 2 . 4/26/2011 That was beautiful. Thank you. |
Cokie316 chapter 2 . 4/26/2011 excellent! |
SINYIB chapter 1 . 4/26/2011 I always follow your spn story, I like your ver of dean and sam so much! So happy to see u try the 5-0 story, love Danny and Steve so much But I love Danny whump more than steve's!v hope to see u next story with Danny whump. Haha |