Reviews for A Partner's Prerogative |
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artigiano chapter 2 . 4/26/2011 I felt like this chapter was quite good. There were still a few spots that I felt it jumped around a tiny bit, but for the most part I thought it was really good and I really liked the dynamic you brought about between Steve and Danny, especially when you were describing Danny's old fantasies and how they changed - I really liked the idea of Hawaii haunting him. I'm definitely going to be looking forward to your next story! |
angelofjoy chapter 2 . 4/26/2011 Oh i loved it! I really really loved it! This story was brilliantly written. Entertaining and heartfelt. It ran the spectrum of emotions. It was fantastic. Can't wait to read more now that you've been properly introduced to the fandom! |
Jules47 chapter 2 . 4/26/2011 I enjoyed reading this story. Poor Danny Steve really did give him quite a scare. |
angelofjoy chapter 1 . 4/26/2011 I'm loving it so far. I would normally wait till i've finished the whole story to post a review, but because this is so good, i felt i needed to let you know in each and every chapter how much i was enjoying it. I love that you made danny into a scrapper! that made me very happy! |
mcatB chapter 2 . 4/26/2011 Great story! Good to see you in this fandom, too! Loved the banter at the end, just like the married couple they are... Thanks! |
jodm chapter 2 . 4/26/2011 This was a terrific story-you showed how Danny and Steve have come to respect and count on each other and become friends. And I love the Star Trek references, except I think of Steve more in the Kirk-Riker mode than as Spock. Danny, on the other hand, would make a great Dr. McCoy . . . |
SGFlutegirl chapter 2 . 4/26/2011 I really liked this. Great first fic. Hope you stick around. :) |
AZGirl chapter 2 . 4/26/2011 Complete and yet it left me wanting more! Great Steve and Danny interaction...Enjoyed this a lot! |
Poohbear-29 chapter 2 . 4/26/2011 Happy sigh...loved the banter in this and well Steve h/c is always a plus. Loved how he got Danny to tell him what happened. Winnie |
soytejana chapter 2 . 4/26/2011 So glad you have decided to write for this show - more more more please! |
akaStoryteller chapter 2 . 4/26/2011 Fantastic! That was a superb ending to this story. So glad you're here and I hope to see other H50 stories from you in the future. |
moonjat54 chapter 2 . 4/26/2011 Very nicely done. I think Danny got a lot off his chest. Now it is just a question of how much Steve will admit to remembering when he gets out of the hospital. Danny may think he is winning this argument but don't underestimate Super SEAL...I think he lives to irritate Danny. I hope you write more for our favorite Hawaiian team. |
Qweb chapter 2 . 4/26/2011 Only now, if Danny was ever able to return to his beloved New Jersey, Hawaii would haunt him forever. - That's just about perfect. Great story. |
McHammy chapter 2 . 4/26/2011 Great story. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it, thanks for sharing. |
Krishnaa chapter 2 . 4/26/2011 Loved it... short and precise... yet so very fulfilling in its own way... complete, yet leaving you wanting for more... wow! Glad ur writing in this fandom... though am a supernatural fan, haven't quite finished up the brotherhood Au ... but h5-0 is relatively new and very fascinating, so am very happpy you have started here... noe i can follow ur stuff in this fandom as well... please kepp posting. Love, Ri |