Reviews for The Blue Diary
TheGrammarHawk chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
There were a few grammatical errors and such, but that's okay. _
I've picked up that Matthew (Canada) is writing this. It's so sad, so pitiful, so sweet.
A question:
Do you think you could write another chapter, from Alfred (America)'s point of view in which Matthew makes a recovery or dies?
Just wondering...
Aelan013 chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
Aww.. that's so sad... I'm gonna cry..
Anonymous chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
My heart sank lower as I scrolled down. Is there a epilogue to this or second chapter? I'd really like to find out what happens next.
InggriSealand chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
huohohoho... saya sudah izin fave lewat FB -wong belum di iyakan sama pemiliknya coba-

ceritanya sedih... n menyentuh hati... buat lagi yaaaa...xDD
Yukai yami chapter 1 . 4/26/2011

PLEASE tell me you're thinking of adding more! Maybe his parent's point of view and/or Alfred finding Matt 'sleeping' and not understanding why he won't wake? Pwease? 3

I feel so guilty that i love Mattie angst... I LOVE U MATTIE! OAO
bigolbagonuts chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
Alright, I'm impressed that you can write like this in your second language (or third, I don't know how many you speak...) I noticed very few mistakes, and they were very very minor. I really enjoyed (well, I was crying, but I think I was supposed to) reading this! You are an awesome writer!
SwissSushi Fangirl chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
Great story I enjoyed it and I didn't see any mistakes :)