|Reviews for The Blue Diary|
| TheGrammarHawk chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
There were a few grammatical errors and such, but that's okay. _
I've picked up that Matthew (Canada) is writing this. It's so sad, so pitiful, so sweet.
Do you think you could write another chapter, from Alfred (America)'s point of view in which Matthew makes a recovery or dies?
| Aelan013 chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
Aww.. that's so sad... I'm gonna cry..
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
My heart sank lower as I scrolled down. Is there a epilogue to this or second chapter? I'd really like to find out what happens next.
| InggriSealand chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
huohohoho... saya sudah izin fave lewat FB -wong belum di iyakan sama pemiliknya coba-
ceritanya sedih... n menyentuh hati... buat lagi yaaaa...xDD
| Yukai yami chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
OHGODS I TOTALLY LOVE THIS!
PLEASE tell me you're thinking of adding more! Maybe his parent's point of view and/or Alfred finding Matt 'sleeping' and not understanding why he won't wake? Pwease? 3
I feel so guilty that i love Mattie angst... I LOVE U MATTIE! OAO
| BirdieInATree chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
Alright, I'm impressed that you can write like this in your second language (or third, I don't know how many you speak...) I noticed very few mistakes, and they were very very minor. I really enjoyed (well, I was crying, but I think I was supposed to) reading this! You are an awesome writer!
| SwissSushi Fangirl chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
Great story I enjoyed it and I didn't see any mistakes :)