|Reviews for Taken|
| SPN Mum chapter 12 . 6/11/2013
Yay! Sam and Mel are going to meet! :) I bet she talks them into staying a little longer than ten minutes though. lol She might have some good advice for them, or some way to keep the hunters from finding them again. I really hope the boys can catch a break soon. Sam still has a lot of healing to do.
| Viviane Renard chapter 12 . 6/9/2013
I'm ecstatic to see another chapter. This story is fantastic, both in terms of characterization and writing. I loved Sam's Shakespeare reference, as it made me happy to see that he could still be snarky even under extreme duress and pain. And then Dean and Sam's banter about the Justice League made me laugh. Even though your story is overall serious, I like that you mix it up and add a little humor. The Winchesters would laugh in the face of evil.
Keep up the great writing. I can't wait for the next chapter!
| nupinoop296 chapter 12 . 6/9/2013
Glad to see this updated! :D
| Guest chapter 11 . 10/18/2012
Are you kidding..?..Really great...What happens next..?...detroiter stranded in tucson...k
| ElizaT chapter 11 . 9/12/2012
Eu queria que sam lembrasse de se torturado por Dean! XD
| Aphrodite's Aethist chapter 11 . 8/8/2012
just outta curiosity this is wincest right? not some brotherly love bonding thing, right! Altho it's been good... i'm just reading between the lines here...
| Guest chapter 11 . 7/6/2012
wow, that was amazing. I found this story today and finished it at 2:30 in the morning. I was dragged away right before the Djinn started torturing Sam, and not knowing what would happened killed me until I got back. I love how accurately you capture their characters. Write more soon!
| loveless fangirl chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
first of all Dean started the Apocolypse. he broke the first seal. sam just opened the door that let lucifer through but the apocolypse was in motion long before then.
| EvilSquirre1 chapter 11 . 6/19/2012
Isn't work just a pain in the ass. I have to go myself to support my eating and having a place to sleep habits. But it really cuts into my free time of watching Supernatural and playing with my dogs. Right now I'm enjoying a little work hiatus. Well enjoying probably not the best word. I have strep throat it's delightful. It feel like I gurgled with shards of glass. So if there are typos in this review I can just blame that;)
I'm so happy to see you picked up this fiction I was wondering if you would again. It's hard for my OCD to start a story that never gets finished:O
The interactions between Sam and Dean were spot on. I love that you pick up on their mannerisms. Plus I can totally picture Sam teasing Dean about sponge baths in order to lighten the mood. Is it bad that I know Mac's diner was the name of the diner with Demon/"Flo" from Season 4? I love that you added that just wanted to let you know I appreciated the reference. Sammy caring about Dean smoking and Dean leaving the cigarettes in plain sight so Sam will get him to stop was an interesting addition to the characters. I love subtlety in this scene that shows how much the brothers love each other. These two would never say it to each other, but the show it with these types of gestures. Bravo to you for finding a great new way to layer that into the story. I'm glad Sam made Dean confess the truth about what happened in the warehouse.
Please don't leave us hanging on the next chapter. That is a long plane flight for the zombie squirrels to Aussie land. But they do enjoy the complementary peanuts;) Keep these great chapters coming and you will be safe for the wrath of the water skiing ninja apocalyptic zombie squirrels in tiny blood stained life jackets;)
| Kirabaros chapter 11 . 6/19/2012
So Dean finally admitted what he did to get Sam out. I know it doesn't make him feel any better but at least Sam understands the reasoning behind it. I'm still here waiting for the updates. Nice work.
| SPN Mum chapter 11 . 6/19/2012
Sam seems to be doing much better. He actually got to eat REAL food! :D Most of the tubes are gone now too. Next thing you know, he'll be clamoring to get out of bed. lol Sam now knows what Dean had to do to get him out of there, and I think it showed him how much Dean loves him, and just how far he'll go to save Sam. Sam seemed interested in Mel, and didn't she tell Dean to bring Sam by to see her, when he got him back? I'd like to see them meet. :) I love the last line! Of course Sam has Dean wrapped around his little finger right now! Dean almost lost Sam, so he gets a 'free pass' for a bit. lol
| Viviane Renard chapter 11 . 6/18/2012
I'm happy to see an update. It's good to see that the brothers were able to have their "serious talk" without anyone losing their cool. And then Sam's pointed comments about Dean's smoking habit were great. I can just imagine him asking primly, "So are you gonna quit now, or what?" and Dean just rolling over for him.
I can't wait to see what happens next!
| nupinoop296 chapter 11 . 6/18/2012
Yay update! I'm glad Sam's doing better!
| Twinchester Angel chapter 10 . 1/18/2012
Well, I for one LOVE the talking! It wasn't boring at all! I just love watching those boys interact. And you write their interactions, thoughts, and dialogue very well and very in character. I think this was one of my favorite chapters so far. I, too, am an angst whore. *giggle* For some reason, I can't get enough of these boys and their angst.
I also have to say that I'm loving your writing style. A lot of times when writers mix the POV it gets jumbled and confusing but you do it so well I didn't even notice you were doing it. This is the closest to watching the tv show as you can get with writing. When you watch the show, you can see the reactions and probable thoughts of both boys. Not just the thoughts of one and their interpretation of what could possibly be going on in the others' head. You pull it off beautifully and I just love that.
The thought of there being more hunters out there gunning for Sam scares the bajeepers out of me too. Even now.
Thanks for another excellent chapter. I can't wait to see Sam's reaction when he finally sees his injuries and how Dean helps him deal with it. Love this story. Love it. More please? *hugs*
| SarahG6 chapter 10 . 1/16/2012
I like that Taken has brought the brothers closer together. I like way it was set up. Sam off on his own, hunters on his trail, and Dean coming at the last minute for the rescue. I love that Dean had to talk to Sam. Can't upset the sick-ha-brilliant!
I particularly liked the authors detail in the recovery chapter, morphine hallucenations are common and seem very real. The author caught that feeling.
Finally there was good editing and no glaring mistakes which happens sometimes even in mainstream published works.
Not sure how helpful I am as a reviewrer but enjoyed the story.