|Reviews for Like a Brother to Her|
| tivalover chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
great story. i totally agree with all of tony's thoughts. i really think ziva told ray that she thought tony was a brother to cover how she really feels. that would be awesome! hey, i can dream right?
anyway, great story and i really love your work. keep it up!
| VioletHawk chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
I felt so bad for Tony in that scene...although a slight part of me does think he deserved it going on with that blonde twit EJ! :)
| luzma chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
guaooo ..congratulation..very good..your chapter...yes alive tiva...very good,
| Zoyarose chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
You've described Ray in that bathroom scene just perfect...that word, "flippant", is exactly what I was trying to think of when Ray said he loved Ziva...it was just his attitude about it and then he had to say that Ziva thinks of him as a brother. Ray knew what he was doing when he said all that because he knows how close Tony and Ziva are.
I don't know if this is something you could continue as a story, but it does have some potential. Maybe you could do a sequel to it, with a few chapters.
Either way, excellent story. :-)