Reviews for Outside the Box
Maplestyle chapter 6 . 3/18/2014
Loved the fight!
Maplestyle chapter 5 . 3/18/2014
OMG Jake, and the coming to the house, and I don't want him to go on a date with Chelsea! And I'm kind of hoping that Bella clocks Kate!
archy12 chapter 1 . 3/18/2014
What?This is probably the first time I've read Edward losing his erection without any outside interruption!Maybe he believes in emotional depth more?But dude,there is something called timing!
Maplestyle chapter 4 . 3/17/2014
Poor Bella :( I actually almost cried for her!
Maplestyle chapter 3 . 3/17/2014
Jake was a fucking creeper LMAO, oh god these poor two, I'm yelling PULL YOUR HEADS OUT OF YOUR ASSES AND FUCK ALREADY at them :D
Annie Butts chapter 2 . 3/17/2014
Killed me dead.
Maplestyle chapter 2 . 3/17/2014
OMG the part with Alice was horrible! But my jaw dropped at her fight with Edward, poor dude!
Maplestyle chapter 1 . 3/17/2014
I don't know how I missed this before but Cappy rec'd it for me on FB tonight and I'm so glad, and sad because I have to go to sleep soon. But I'm going to read as much as I can before then!
Capricorn75 chapter 11 . 3/12/2014
Loved it! These two were awesome. Thanks for writing and sharing!
Capricorn75 chapter 1 . 3/11/2014
These two are cracking me up. I don't know who's sorrier!
Vivi H88 chapter 11 . 3/11/2014
Great story :) loved it
Guest chapter 11 . 1/27/2014
I don't think Bella understands the word slow.
Guest chapter 8 . 1/27/2014
See? A bunch of morons! Act your fucking age! Geez
Guest chapter 7 . 1/27/2014
How old is Bella? I swear she acts like a mellow dramatic teenager. I wouldn't like her at all.
Guest chapter 4 . 1/26/2014
She is a horrible person. You're a great writer but your characters suck.
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