|Reviews for A Single Kiss|
| edboy4926 chapter 2 . 3/20/2013
| Renascielle chapter 2 . 7/6/2011
One thing though, the hole "declaration of love" was a bit abrupt. Maybe you could of led up to it in a more romantic way.
But other than that, it's great because you can easily imagine these two having this conversation .
| Renascielle chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
Nooooooo ! Don't kill yourself you idiot ! You're an amazing character Lightning !
Have yet to read chapter 2. Can't wait !
Try and make paragraphs a bit shorter, it can sometimes put people off.
| person chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
wow what an ending