|Reviews for dried leaves on the surface of a pool|
| Unfortunate Fates chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
Will there actually end up being more? I just loved this so much, and I know that quote by heart (the poem as well, actually, Richard Siken is incredible). If so, I'm looking forward to it, and if not I'd just like to congratulate you for this, because your style is flawless and distinct and every sentence was another reason to love you :)
| Anon chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
Hi! I like this. A lot. A lot a lot. Please update? It'd be awesome. Plus I need more clues to figure out who it is. :)
| SpookyMuffin13 chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
I didn't really understand what was going on. And it was still both riveting and beautiful. Mark of a good writer ;)
| SlashMyDreams chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
Wow, I love the style of this and the ambiguity, how you could imagine almost anyone to be these people. Actually, I know it's the wrong fandom, but I can't help thinking of Arthur/Eames from Inception.
Also, you rule forever for the Siken quote at the beginning.
| battygirl123 chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
Wow that was really powerful. I can't wait to see the second part. I'm still kinda confused, but in a good way. Like I'm still thinking about the story and who the people could be. Great job on this one!
| SouthernHemmy chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
Wow will PM you...SouthernHemmy