Reviews for The Uchiha Connection |
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Ginseng Overdose chapter 4 . 11/7/2011 YES! I was ecstatic when I saw this story pop up. Not that I knew about it before but ever since I read Connections, I've really loved the idea of Harry being Sasuke's cousin. That's what this reminded me of. From these four chapters (not enough!), I think I'm going to enjoy this story very much. Itachi's actions are certainly rash in this chapter. I can't really blame him for his anger after the situation that Harry got himself into with his five year old mind but with a little bit of thought, he could've both prevented Harry from seeing him and delivered swift justice to Vernon. So, that was somewhat annoying. Only other thing I cant think of is paragraph spacing. They're consistently a bit long. Maybe it's just me but when I try to read some of these seven line paragraphs, my eyes can't keep track of which line I was reading before. It makes your story just a little bit harder to take in. I think breaking it up more would help your flow. Looking forward to future updates. |
Ebony-Dove chapter 4 . 11/7/2011 Your update made my day~ I'll be looking forward to your next update. |
mabidiso chapter 4 . 11/7/2011 Holy crappola that was exciting! LOVE so very much what Itachi did to Vernon. Chakra seal in the house? That could only be Dumbledore...does that mean he knows about shinobi? Would Hana have shown him seals to repress chakra? I can't think of a scenario where that would make sense. Hm...a mystery. Would that also be why Harry could feel a build up within him that would suddenly dissipate, leaving him with a cold feeling inside? Was Itachi truly fighting Kisame, or was he fighting his own clone henged as Kisame for Harry's edification to later relate to the Leaf nin? I love your style of writing. You pack a whollop with dense descriptions and imagery in so few words. Good stuff. |
shizukoyasu chapter 4 . 11/7/2011 -! can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon! ) |
Kurai Ame chapter 4 . 11/7/2011 Brilliant! Please update soon - Kurai ame |
Lady Red 88 chapter 3 . 11/6/2011 Wicked! This is shaping up to be an excellent read. Nice to see a fresh take on the old 'Harry is related to the Uchiha Clan'. Anyway, can't wait for an update - I'm sure more than a few people have probably said that to you. _ Go Itachi! Nice to be reading about Sakura and Kakashi getting a chance to work together as well. Anyway, looking forward to more. |
Icy Fairy Hybrid chapter 3 . 11/2/2011 Good awsome story please write more and is going to be slash in the story |
Plunny.Empress chapter 3 . 10/26/2011 How truly interesting. - I look forward to more. - |
angel61991 chapter 3 . 10/17/2011 yay! itachi 2 the rescue! please update soon. |
evil genus chapter 3 . 10/12/2011 You know I think Itachi shoudl raise Harry! |
LilC16 chapter 3 . 10/8/2011 Interesting start, and your grammar is better then a lot of stories on here. Now I'm hoping this doesn't turn into slash, but I have been disappointed before. |
Zlatka chapter 3 . 10/4/2011 I like your idea.. Hope next chapter will be soon :) I wanna see how everybody will be react |
DragonFire Princess chapter 3 . 10/2/2011 Love the story, Hope you'll uploads the story soon, I want to know what happen next in the story. So Please update the story ASAP. When will you continue this story? |
ShadowGuardianX chapter 3 . 10/1/2011 i love you story! truley awesome. Go Itachi! hehe i can't wait for Vernon to get his ass kicked or killed, maybe maimed. hehe. i cant wait to read what itachi does to vernon. XD |
darkblue91 chapter 3 . 9/25/2011 how sae ** |