Reviews for The Darkness that Consumes
SoraIsMyHomeboy chapter 5 . 6/14/2011
Awesome! It is indeed very intense! I love how they did all that work to get there and then Yen Sid didn't hellp at all XD one thing that annoyed me though was that you could 'buy' Keyblades. That's just wrong and totatlly kills them
NightRaven13 chapter 5 . 6/12/2011
I'm telling you right off the bat...I'm totally faving and watching your story from now on...

Its such a RARE occurence these days to stumble upon a half decent story within the KH Fandom its practically become sad...

That being said, imagine my surprise when I click on this little ditty you got running here...I was a bit hesitant at first, especially since few stories that are featured on the first page of the archive are hardly ever good, but then I went along against my better judgement and read on...

And on...and on...and on...untill I finally got to the end and pulled my hair out in frustration because there wasn't any more TO read!

God...your story is just so...awesome...there are so many awesome points to it I don't think I can put them all in just one review! The premise just rocks...I must admit its similar to a previous idea I had back when I wasn't so lazy with the writting...but your implimentation and dedication just totally blew me away! I LOVE LOVE LOVE this and I really do hope you continue! Don't be lazy like me and not get around to putting awesome sauce like this on the'll dissapoint dedicated readers if you do so! :)

Anyway...much luck on the writting and I REALLY hope you continue soon! XD

Jenna Jameson chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
koool mang i luv sora.
Anna Crosszeria chapter 4 . 6/3/2011

That's just a heartbreaker!
Don't Shoot the Puppy chapter 4 . 6/2/2011
Cool-nice twist at the end there. This is really good. And Sora's being stupid. Everyone (should) know you attack the Darkside's face after he punches the ground by running up it. Or, at least, I think so. It gets you tech points, so I assume that's what you do...
SoraIsMyHomeboy chapter 4 . 6/2/2011
Congrats on your graduation! :D and I loved it as always. I do desperately want to know what happens next X) and Riku is perfect in this, he would so get in Sora's way with Kairi but then cover it up. Such a Riku thing to do.
RedHound chapter 4 . 6/2/2011
This is a truly fantastic fanfic, I look forward to future updates :)
RedHound chapter 3 . 5/7/2011
Fantastic! I liked the cliffhanger and how you implemented Donald and Goofy as other school kids. Good job and I cannot wait until you next update.
SoraIsMyHomeboy chapter 3 . 5/6/2011
"Kairi...I'm not worth saving." OH MY GOSH, SOOOO SAD! Loving this story, it's so intense. I think it's a really interesting and new perspective on Sora. Can't wait to see what happens next. Quick question though: Did Kairi see him become the monster then?
RedHound chapter 2 . 5/6/2011
Very Good! This fanfiction has if continued could be extremely popular! Also I like the name Major D. Vice lolz
Anna Crosszeria chapter 3 . 5/5/2011

Anna Crosszeria chapter 2 . 4/30/2011
ohh ... I see ... you're doomed SORA! :))

I wonder ... will Roxy show up here? also Nami-chan and Axel?
DestinyKeyblader28 chapter 2 . 4/30/2011
another great chapter nice work
SoraIsMyHomeboy chapter 2 . 4/30/2011
OOH, CLIFFHANGER. I like it! One thing was the transition, though, from talking to the old man and sneaking into the palace. Seemed a little rushed. Maybe i'm just slow but it seemed like he ran off thinking 'i have no time to waste!' and all of a sudden, he was in the throne room. Idk, that's just me. Otherwise, CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAP. i love this story! poor sora though X'(
ThatKidWhoSkate aka Skateboard chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
Amazing simply amazing. That was fuckin epic and with no writing mistakes it was just good ... Keep it up
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