|Reviews for What Could Have Been|
| DukeBrymin chapter 1 . 2/20
| JessicaRachelPotter chapter 11 . 1/27
Please update! I'm really intrigued by the whole time thingy, and from your authors note it looks like you were part way through chapter twelve!
| Spirit Soldier chapter 11 . 12/19/2013
I hope you're gonna continue this story, cause it's really good.
| Diamondgirl3 chapter 11 . 4/8/2013
This is an amazing story! Can't wait for the next update!
| rosabelle101 chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
Everything about this story is sexist. Your profile picture, the way Harry says nothing bad will happen as long as he's there, and also, Ginny thought that the CoS OPENING WAS HER FAULT, SO SHE WOULDN'T HAVE SAID IT WASNT. Now excuse me, im off to read better stories more worthy of my time.
| Arithmetic13 chapter 7 . 2/3/2013
This was a nice chapter, you didn't rewrite any scenes.
| Arithmetic13 chapter 6 . 2/3/2013
Well you did sort of rewrite already happened events. Get a beta to read through your story, that will help. Nice writing!
| Arithmetic13 chapter 4 . 2/2/2013
I really like this story, but there are quite a few repeat scenes of things they already decided or happened. Also you erase past scenes like they never happened. Try reading your story through in sequence and pretend to never have known this story before.
| Arithmetic13 chapter 3 . 2/2/2013
Quick question, how did Harry get away with using magic in Egypt?
| jpink3125 chapter 11 . 9/4/2012
Love this story. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/7/2012
NO! BAD HARRY! YOU WORK OUT EVERY OTHER DAY, it's better for you.
| dreams823 chapter 11 . 7/14/2012
| LilyLuna1456 chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
This chapter is great! It made me laugh..
| angelsfanfictions chapter 11 . 6/30/2012
hey i love this story are you going to write more anytime soon cause i love it alot.
| YouSeeStrangerThings chapter 2 . 6/19/2012
You said #12 Privet Drive its number 4 privet drive number 12 grimmauld place