Reviews for Broken Pieces
Avid Reider chapter 2 . 12/16/2012
Wow. Your grammar and spelling are pristine, the characterization legitimate, and the whole thing flowed. I like the title and chapter titles along with the summary. The story itself was both sad and satisfying. Excellent job!
Avid Reider chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
Awwwww Eliot baby why are you always hurt so? How could the team do that to him? I mean, I get it, but they shoulda known that they'd only hurt him more. Love it!
Jenn11 chapter 2 . 4/27/2011
Absolutely love this. Wonderful story. Thanks for sharing it.
cedricsowner chapter 2 . 4/26/2011
Nice idea. Really liked it!
Less101 chapter 2 . 4/26/2011
Great story. They are so much better as a team. Thank you.
Aelan010 chapter 2 . 4/25/2011
so perfect.. and so true, they never notice when he's hurting or broken.