|Reviews for A Bleached Fate: Trailer|
| Angry Santo chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
This is very well received please continue.
| Mitsukuri Tsukiyama chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
A darker shiro, I like!
| Jimbobob5536 chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
Interesting premise. I'd like to see more.
| reality deviant chapter 1 . 7/2/2011
great idea, do please continiu
| Rhavis chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
I say continue!
I beg of you: CONTINUE!
I AM ON MY KNEES!
| Abyssal Apsu chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
on the subject of explaining the reason a second summoning didn't work you must simply remember that the throne of kings is a trans-temporal ,without a true sorcerer who specializes in miracles of time or an artifact of massive power(i.e. the grail), they wouldn't stand a chance at summoning her.
| Anubis of The Highway Thieves chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
This looks like it will be a good fic, It's kinda funny picturing their faces when they meet Kenpachi and compare him to Berserker.
Will Shirou be able to copy Zanpaktou and their abilities?
| ocsummers chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
you must continiou it seriously i like it very inventive the whole dismissive air they get rid of the giant was awesome
| Takeshi Yamato chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
This story looks like it'd be fun. :D
Shirou, Rin, and Saber being in a mutual threesome sounds rather interesting. (and fun-I hope we get some lemons in here! :D )
And yeah, Shirou and Rin storming the Seireitei to get Saber back is going to be lots of fun-I wonder where Ichigo and the gang are going to fit into this? Will they side with the Shinigami, or will they side with the two Magi?
Please, continue this story. I'd like to see where it goes. :)
Azure Knight of the Raging Tempest
| Keigai O Yain chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
I would most definitely like to read more.
| Tri-Emperor of The Twilight chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
This sounds AWESOME I have a question though. Since Shiro can Recreate any sword he sees does that mean he can Trace Zanpaktou?
P.S I really hope to see a fight between Byakuya's "Senbonzakura Kageyoshi" and Shirou's "Unlimited Blade Works because the sheer amount of sword spamming epicness on both sides would be amazing."
| giodan chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
i like it! do what you wonna do! not what oter wonna do!
| carlos13 chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
a story with much potential, I hope to read
Arturia think could stay on earth if you get a gigai
| maximorph1 chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
this...is very interesting. If you write more, I will read it. I like how you have made the throne a myth instead of a part of soul society. It would be best for the throne to be a separate dimension for all those that have left the cycle of rebirth.
| BlackWarth chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
Seeing as this is your story you can change the rules, but in canon Saber could remain in the world as long as Rin retain at least 1 command seal and give her prana. It is true that world is trying to get rid of her even in canon but this is not limited to Saber but is same for all servants. The command seal function is not only to grant absolute orders but work like a passport that grant the servant permission to be in the world. Unless the servant possess a special ability (Indipendent Action) and said ability is of a sufficient high level a servant would disappear in less then 1 hour even if his prana reserve were full without a command seal to anchor him to the world. Then there is the Throne that in canon is outside space and time and once a hero go to the throne it can not be removed. When summoned in the world the heroic spirits that appears are copies of the original who remain in the throne and normally they are more along the line of energy beings (similar to Ascendend beings in Stargate) the exception is when they are summoned by the grail that make it so they are more similar to when they were alive but make them weaker then in their energy form that is so because not even the grail can fully summon and control them at their full power.