|Reviews for From the Ashes We Rise|
| Valtharia chapter 10 . 2/8
I love this fic! I hope you update soon!
| DKLC chapter 10 . 1/2
I really liked it. There is an abundance of Alistair/FCouslamd disc out there and it gets a bit boring. It's nice to have the whole love-lost thing going on. And I totally crush on Cullen, it should have been an option to tap that during the mage origins, just sayin'.
| DKLC chapter 6 . 1/2
This was a nice chapter. Starting from the story from cast aside Amell warden's POV, I automatically want to hate the Queen. I'm glad you made her likeable, and it looks like Alistair will be happy with her.
| DKLC chapter 5 . 1/2
"Lovers turned into friends, friends turned into acquaintances."
That was a great line.
| DKLC chapter 4 . 1/2
I really like the maternal role Wynne has in this. It's very nice.
| DKLC chapter 3 . 1/2
Good lord, the rose! You're killing me here!
| DKLC chapter 1 . 1/2
Oh my God! I think my heart just broke into a thousand pieces. What a beautiful first chapter.
| Bert8813 chapter 34 . 12/15/2013
All I can say is that this was an amazing story.
| Barbapapa chapter 34 . 12/8/2013
Thanks for finishing the story. I have loved reading it. The ending was just perfect.
| MaiWishes chapter 34 . 11/28/2013
This was a really good story! I love how Cullen sides with the mages.
Im waiting to get my comp fixed to play DA2, is Cullen an asshole in it? Im scared to play it because it sounds soooo depressing with all the terrorist attacks, the mages abuse and even the dalish are slaughtered?! Should I play it...? Lol. Anyway GL with the rewrite, and gratz on completing this one
Btw, why do you reply in the comments section to peoples reviews? Not many will notice you replied there, but if you press the speach bubble by their comment and reply that way they get an email. Not sure if you knew that
| Anna Kruczynski chapter 33 . 11/28/2013
I don't even remember writing about Tavish to be honest. It took me too long to write this story which makes it filled with mistakes as well. I totally forgot about Tavish later in the story and about the bloody war dog as well. There's too much repetition and drama as well that I want to get rid off. I will do my rewrite over a shorter period of time. Your comments are greatly appreciated. I think I worked up too the part where things turn around for too long which makes the story boring after 10 chapters. I will take your comments into account when I start working on the rewrite. Thanks!
| MaiWishes chapter 17 . 11/28/2013
Tavish!? Not that old bastard, he's so rude until you tell him of mages wrong doings. He'll be worse than Greagoir. Now Harrith would have been much more interesting :)
| MaiWishes chapter 14 . 11/27/2013
She rolls over on her back too much. She's the bloody hero of Ferelden, Im sure she can keep her bloody child. Its pretty amusing imagining the chantry trying to steal it from her. Maybe as the months pass she'll love her unborn child and grow some balls
| MaiWishes chapter 10 . 11/27/2013
Stoping in to say Im glad you didn't go all psycho!Cullen on us. He's more mature and less innocent but not nigh unlikable and theres no overabundance of angst and drama between them or in his thoughts about her, you know? Its refreshing. I also like the idea of the child, who is now first in line for the throne. Maybe it will survive since its a mage and stronger? Farfetched but possible...maybe
| eboncat chapter 32 . 11/27/2013
I like the changes you made. It flows much smoother in this version :-) can't wait to see where you take us next! :-D