Reviews for Somethings You Can't Fight
Gnarled Bone chapter 4 . 5/22/2012
Awesome fic, hope you update soon.
GeekedOtter chapter 3 . 4/30/2012
-Gets a cookie- Huzzah! -Holds cookie up in the air- For a great story with great cookies!

...Uhumm Hm hmmm... Poor Tomoko-chan being bullied like that. I'll kick the other girls a$$'s if they try to hurt Tomoko-chan's doggy-like ears! ... And Tomoko!

I await the next chapter!
Gotenks007 chapter 4 . 3/11/2012
yes, new chapter, and here i tought you were gonna take a longer time u.u

The OC are great, their personatilies are unique on this story

I like how yuki call sora by 'sir sora' its funny and i like it that she's the only one to do so

cant wait to see Reiko

update as soon as you can n.n
BlueCrackers chapter 4 . 3/11/2012
Hey there. Remember me? :p It's Chibi! Sorry for ignoring this fic for a while. It was very rude of me, but I stand by my previous review:

This fic is good!

As well as all the other stuff before, I think this has a lot of potential. :b

Onto the newer stuff, I think you've executed your OC's personalities and relevance brilliantly! They're easy to remember, great side-characters, and are fairly relevant to the story! :D I applaud you there.

No spelling mistakes I could find, only some grammar mistakes, and very good paragraphing. :p

All in all, I think it's gotten better since I last reviewed. A lot better. :p

Also, I noticed that in the 4th chapter, there was a [1] note thing after Sora triee to talk with her cheek being stretched, but no note after the chapter. Needs fixing. :p

Keep up the good work, and I'll keep the reviews coming!

-Crackers (Chibi)
Gotenks007 chapter 3 . 2/11/2012
I really like this story, you really stay in-character

knowing that not all her family accept her makes me guess it's her mom

cant wait to see reiko, she's one of my fav. characters
Entropy Pixel chapter 3 . 1/9/2012
I really enjoyed your fan fic! I think you captured the characters very well, you are good at keeping them in character.

Your fic cheered me up after a tiring day. So many fics have WAY too much angst! A kiss scene between Sora and a member of her harem would be great /

Keep up the good work!
Krabkrab chapter 2 . 12/14/2011
But.. but Tsuki ~does~ feel that way about Sora...
Lie chapter 3 . 10/12/2011
just saw and read the update

thank you for the cookies...i admit to having a sweet tooth ;)

the chap was nice

the flow of the story continues just right and koharus thoughts

or reactions are as always amusing

further do i like how you combine soras family life into the plot or show some more insight to her character

there is definitly more depth to it,then just writing about her glorious "knight hood"

good work !
deathbybunny chapter 3 . 10/10/2011
This is a great story. Love it. Love it. Love it. Haven't seen a AU story that was this good. Keep up the good work and I hope you update again soon.
amyannonymous chapter 2 . 8/1/2011
sooooo goood ! plz continue the good work! love it

btw when do i get my plate of cookies? xD
Lie chapter 2 . 7/26/2011
Tsuki seems to be really,really anti-sora,so stand-offish...hmm...i am actually asking myself how they even became to be friends ;D

but on the other hand..Yuki made an appereance AND you added Soras dad/family

the scenes were good,you have new ideas and wrap everything nicely so that it still fits the characters

i like the story so far
WolfDragonGod chapter 2 . 6/30/2011
yay cookies...i can't wait to read more of this cool story.
BlueCrackers chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
Give me teh cO0kies! And another chapter, for that matter!

Very comical, a bit OOC bit still awesome. :D

Grammar was incredibly good, that is a plus extra plus plus.

You evened it out pretty well. I thought it was good.

And lastly, the content was funny! Fairly indeed, and how Sora went to the group of guys to see if any were gay... Bahaha!

Looking forward for more,

Chibi
Nata chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
Wooooooow I REALLY LIKE THAT!

PLEASE MAKE another chapter!
Alex 3 chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
waah~ it's me again.. sorry if it bothers you -; but i really like this fanfic. i really wish you'd continue this, kit-san! - -enthusiastic look- i like this story :3 i don't even care if some of the words were spelled wrong XD i just love your shitsurakuen stories! 3 :)) please create more chapters of this too :D
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