Reviews for Not Fast Enough
Miisakee chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
Great story, *sniff*, poor Wally.

Anyways, happy birthday, told ya I'd review your story.
HRC chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
I like the diaclaimer


thank u for mentioning me.

i liked it and the ending
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
AW! T.T Poor Wally! *U* This is awesome! *U* Adore this! sad, yet so amazing! *U*
LucidKren chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
Failing to save someone is always hard. I think you captured that here. Nice work, Ash.

Ninja in Training chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
awwww I loved it:D Sad stories draw me in somehow...
just-O chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
Very eloquently executed. I think you captured Barry's personality perfectly with what he said to Wally. I could hear the conversation go on in my head, which is always a good thing. Also a huge fan of what you did by taking Wally to the grave site. Really nice job overall. Thank you so much for participating in my challenge and writing this story. Hope to see more from you in the future.
shesXsuperXfreaky chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
Poor wally D: this was a good idea :D
No1butjoe chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
Another great YJ, Ash! I felt so sorry for poor KF! :(

BTW, I don't know if you've heard or not, but BW is closed for good.
mahlia chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
I'm on the mend and lurking around the challenge boards when I noticed you posted this. :) You managed to pack quite a punch into this little oneshot, I'd be proud if I were you!

Personally, your last line was the *perfect* way to end this. And I can't imagine what went through Wally's head as he watched all of this happen, but was completely powerless to do anything about it.

Nicely done!