|Reviews for Fair Game|
| iloveromance chapter 4 . 12/9/2013
This is wonderful; the conversation with her parents makes them seem more human since they weren't mentioned in the movie (except for her father's public relations job! ) ). I can just picture this scenario happening and believe me that is a compliment to your amazing writing! Really lookign foreword to more of this! I love it!
| iloveromance chapter 3 . 12/9/2013
I know I already reviewed the first few chapters of this but I've gone back and re-read them so I wanted to leave a few more comments. In re-reading chapter 1, I was so happy to find that you are continuing this story because I absolutely love it (and Roman Holiday!). It's such a great story and you've put a lot of work into it. I love that Chapter 2 centers around Mario Delani, but this James person seems like he could cause trouble for both Joe and Anne. I hope he doesn't try to tarnish their reputations! And finally Chapter 3... I love this story more and more with each chapter! You've written Hennessy extremely well and I love that Joe is choosing love and faith over money.
| readingfrenzy chapter 4 . 11/17/2013
What a splendid surprise to find that you had not abandoned this story. I hope you update soon...PLEASE! Once again you have crafted the dialogue and emotions of the character so well that we are quite invested in the story and, indeed, "care" about it and Joe and Anne.
| f.wentworth chapter 4 . 10/8/2013
So wonderful that you've updated the story. I'm eagerly looking forward to the next installment. Poor Anne...wonder if her parents will have her perform her public duties more now she's home. And of course, poor Joe. Will he be heading back to the US, via the UK maybe?
| Heather Snow chapter 4 . 10/3/2013
Yay! So glad that you got a chance to update this. I enjoyed this chapter just like the ones before. Clever Anne to burn the photographs when she did. I find it very interesting that James didn't mention the fire... Looking forward to more!
| Heather Snow chapter 3 . 4/21/2013
This was great. I felt you really captured Joe's character. I'd love to see you come back and finish it.
| f.wentworth chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
Sorry damn &£ iphone keypad - finger slipped and tapped sth i shouldn't have and got the review sent before i was finished.
Anyway, i love your writing - and how you have kept to the movie's tone too.
Please don't take too long to post the next chapter. Thanks!
| f.wentworth chapter 3 . 7/8/2012
I was wondering if anyone had tried out a fanfic for RH, after recently rewatched on a plane. And i am so glad to find yours! I think you have got me out of only following Pride & Prejudice ffs.
Please continue the story. I am very intrigued by what Mr James will do next - if he will exp
| Hopelessromantic888 chapter 3 . 6/16/2012
Hi, I watched Roman Holiday recently and, while I loved it, the ending made me sad. So please, don't give up on this story! I know the last update is only about three months ago, but I've read so many stories before where the writer is going strong until they suddenly quit. This is pretty good, I'm honestly surprised that more people haven't tried rewriting the ending to this film.
| readingfrenzy chapter 3 . 3/17/2012
Shannon-You made my day! I am new to this site and did not think in a zillion years I would find a fanfic on Roman Holiday. It, too, is my all-time favorite movie and I have often wondered about an after story.
I love, love, love your story. You are a great writer and I cannot wait to see more chapters. You have the characterizations down perfectly! While many writers make things a bit contrived in A/U stories, your dialogues and characters are believable. It takes a lot of finesse to make someone believe that true love could happen in one day...and you've got it!
I'll definitely be coming back for more! I know perfection deserves time to create, but hurry and post again soon!
| Lahiwe chapter 3 . 3/7/2012
Beautiful work. I continue to be amazed at how you keep the mood of the story just perfect, your awareness to the details of the time period, your flawless characterization...it's almost as if you were Dalton Trumbo himself!
| funnygirl00 chapter 3 . 3/1/2012
Oh THANK YOU for updating. I am really looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you!
| Lahiwe chapter 2 . 2/8/2012
This is a WONDERFUL story. In such a small, small fandom, it is a treasure to find such a well written story as this. You have the characters down to a science; their inner dialogue is perfect. Even Mario Delani. It's amazing. One thing I would say is to maybe add a little more humor (I like the bits of dry humor you already have, just a little more is good) since it was a romantic comedy. I love this movie so much, and you've done justice to it. I hope you continue this story!
| funnygirl00 chapter 2 . 1/3/2012
Please update soon. I've always loved Roman Holiday and I've always wondered what would have happened if Joe and Ann got together again. So please update soon, you're doing a marvelous job with this story.
| realityrelief chapter 2 . 9/15/2011
This story seems to have great potential! Hopefully it will be a nice long one and updates will come soon.