Reviews for Gravestone
LaverylK chapter 1 . 2/27
Gosh. I wish it didn't end there. I hope more comes. But I love it
Paramaniac chapter 1 . 6/3/2014
This would make a fantastic multi-chapter story. In fact a lot o your one shots would. But anyways fabulous writing as always.
Quinntana2 chapter 1 . 2/16/2014
:)(: Noooo..your stories always leave me craving more and more. Honestly, you're a brilliant writer. I loved this one-shot. Interesting switch-up with the supernatural roles and it works quite well. Bella's confession of love was so dang cute. Bella has an amazing personality here. Wonderful.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
Please learn you geography but the writing is good
Lunaris-wind chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
I liked it! It was a fun twist on the Cullen's that created a very enjoyable dynamic to the interactions with Bella. Wish something like this was a full story.
B. Silverbow chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
Okay, it's been a while since I read this, but I just read it again and I realized how much I loved it. I don't suppose you would consider making it into a story? Please...
Guerrilla Warfare chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
Hahaha, I love replying with "Your mom...", it makes everything funnier in my opinion, especially when you say something like, "Your mom made me a sandwich!" or something totally nonsensical like that.
sierra145 chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
lol! i liked the ending of the story and when bella confesses her love to alice. please continue? :-)
Partying In Canada chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
This is a cool set up for a longer story, it would be intersting to see in the future.
Random Peep chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
Woo! Loved it! This one was really interesting, anyways awesome job! P
snixxx69 chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
I love this. Really, you've got me hooked. You're a really talented author, you know.

Hope you continue with it someday.
Buckster chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
Another great story. Also another one that will make an excellent longer one. I have no idea how you do it, but keep up the good work.
lynettecullen chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
Why not continue this?

This...this could be something beautiful.
lilce1992 chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
Hahaha Bella is a comedian in this fic
Invak chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
Man oh man. So, you know how you always have to write that disclaimer thing at the beginning of your chapters? I feel like I should write that thing about you drawing me into your alternate universes at the beginning of all my reviews for your stories. Damn. I think this is worth continuing. There are so many different directions you can take this. I do appreciate that last bit of your author's note though: "I've got quite a few to finish before then, though. "

Yes, yes indeed you do. We've got our eyes on you. I'm still looking forward to the day I can add one of your multi-chaptered stories to my favourites. :P

I really liked the cafeteria scene; Bella just grabbing food for Alice and kicking out the seat for her. 'Twas good, man. You've got to know each other real well to be able to pull that off at the right moment. Friendly Alice and equally enthusiastic Emmett was great too, and I must admit, I snorted and giggled at the lively graveyard joke. I have a terrible sense of humour. Throw me a lame joke and I'll laugh my head off. Bella suggesting she lay at her grave and play dead was good too. I had a good laugh at that as well.

Alas, Bella not having a way with words. She's sure got a way with the physical way of explaining her feelings though (which might come in handy later, y'know ;D). I'd have to agree with James on that one, but without the sarcasm. That's not to say I thought Carlisle's hand on Bella's chest was romantic.

So… one year trial, eh? If Bella's more able to be herself when she's close to Alice, I wonder how things are going to go during that trial period during those times when she's not around. In the meantime, James and Victoria are on the loose, and the Volturi are still there in the background. Like I said, man oh man.
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