Reviews for Harry Potter a New Chance
ShadowBasilisk chapter 4 . 7/8/2012
the multiple points of view aren't working..
samna chapter 6 . 3/7/2012
I can't put my finger on it, but something is off. You have ideas, so the potential is there. Maybe it's because everything seems to be happening lickity split... Maybe a bit of fleshing out of the material would help with that.
samna chapter 3 . 3/7/2012
Jumping into other scenes and perspectives? Okay, that can make things more interesting.
samna chapter 2 . 3/7/2012
You might want to remember to look over grammar when putting out the chapters. It may be annoying, but it makes for a smoother read if it's edited, and you won't loose readers who can't stand the headache of poor grammar...It's not catching me yet, but maybe it's because there isn't an enticing atmosphere or plot to latch me in yet... It's early in the story. I'll give it time.
samna chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
Changing tenses too much, it's distracting. The beginning is abrupt, but that can be okay if you make the rest of it work for you. However, it's a shaky start.
Olaf74 chapter 5 . 7/16/2011
*removes his Jaw from the floor*

BLOODY HELL!

You are full of surprises! In the positive turn i mean.

Please continue the story very very soon.
Jon Rivers chapter 2 . 7/13/2011
Please continue the story.

It has a potential.
GinaStar chapter 4 . 6/6/2011
Very enjoyable! I look forward to reading more!
Olaf74 chapter 3 . 4/30/2011
*removes his Jaw from the floor*

BLOODY HELL!

You are full of surprises! In the positive turn i mean.

Please continue the story very very soon.
Tsunami.Samurai chapter 3 . 4/30/2011
What an interesting chapter? I want to know who took Harry and why the vampires are involved...it's very good
CHEEKY-HERMONIE chapter 2 . 4/28/2011
update soon love this story