|Reviews for The Pureblood Princess|
| Glitch-e-r-749 chapter 19 . 10/4
WHAT THE HELL YOU ARE CRUEL IM CRYING SO HARD HOW COULD YOU MAKE HER LOSE HER MEMORY WHYYYYYYYYY. Its an amazing story, though I found the pacing too slow at some time BUT SHE LOST 16 YEARS OF HER LIFE AND HE HAD TO LIVE WTIHOUT HER AND FOUND HER BUT SHE DIDNT KNOW. So impactful the ending was amazing BUT THE FEELS
| Ravenfeather2002 chapter 4 . 10/2
Good so far. Weird that Harry calls Daphne by her first name, though.
| Devil.Harry chapter 19 . 9/30
good one, thanks.
| Billy Ruffian chapter 19 . 9/25
Whew, what a relief! That must have been aggravating for your readers when they had to wait between chapters. Great story, though I'm still not quite sure when Daphne started falling for Harry.
| Billy Ruffian chapter 18 . 9/25
| Firecanburn chapter 19 . 9/15
I don't know if you even read these anymore, but I had to log in and review. I haven't logged in for maybe 3 years, and prior to that another 2-3.
I come back to HP fanfiction every once in a while when I'm too stressed to focus on real books, and this story reminded me why I loved this genre for so many years.
Your writing is a tiny bit scattered in a few places, but overall I found it very well written. I think you captured the attitude of a 16-17 year old witch surprisingly well, given that its harry potter fanfiction.
The ending is honestly the part that warrants this review, though. I think the story would be much less powerful if not for this wonderful way to end it. It leaves just enough mystery while answering a ton of questions in a very oblique and enjoyable way. It's like solving a simple puzzle while thoroughly enjoying the ride.
Thank you for writing such a wonderful story. It made my last 2-ish days pretty great and even taught me a bit about myself. After all, that's what good writing is meant to do right?
I hope you keep writing. No matter what genre or piece, I think its important to keep writing. Good luck with everything in your life, and thanks again for your small contribution to the HP fanfiction world. I'll throw in a favorite so I remember to come back after a few years.
Always a pleasure.
| Grand Witch Alliance chapter 19 . 9/13
I loved everything about the story minus the epilogue, and not because it had Daphne lose her memories. Most of the hate comes from the fact that there were a lot of grammatical errors, or perhaps, because the chapter was longer, there were more notable ones. Another part of my hate comes from the fact that you jumped a lot in the epilogue. I didn't particularly like the fact that they were getting married and that they had a child just sort of pass by. I'm not asking for a wedding scene or their impregnation scene or whatever but, the story mentions Mallorca, and then boom, wedding. It mentions Daphne leaving the hospital scene, then a few years later, and boom, there's already a child that's a few years old (at least I gather Claire's a few years old since she can speak). I feel like either of those could've been more explicitly mentioned since it's not like Daphne lost that part of her memory.
| rescue 007 chapter 19 . 9/5
The entire story was good but the epilogue just made it all seem lazy. Like really what were you thinking to just have her loose her memory somehow and the entire battle just blow past it lol terrible ending 3/10 stars
| ThatGalladeAcrossTheStreet chapter 9 . 8/24
Damn, I'd been afraid that would happen... Harry, you poor bastard.
| ericmyrs chapter 15 . 8/20
Very interesting fic.
Epilogue brought a tear to my eye.
Probably the best characterisation of Daphne I've read, even if the last couple of chapters were a bit heartbreaking.
How the hell did Astoria end up with Nott anyway.
| Squarekiddo chapter 19 . 8/17
Awesome writing, really good plan stories personalitis etc etc.
However personally I think I might hate this story, dont take that the wrong way, you did a good job, its just I dont like this, at all really, but im aware its my personal opinion, I mean I cant even get over the the piss poor excuse of a... Nevermind personal issues with this story shouldnt really be in a review.
Keep writing, im going to read some more of your things someday, see if I like that more.
| Squarekiddo chapter 9 . 8/16
havent really had a moment when I truly felt a chapter was Horrible, but this one... truly freaking horrible, disliked it so much Im seriously thinking of not even continuing, truly bad move in my opinion, truly truly bad move.
| harryislife chapter 19 . 8/16
I liked everything except the epilogue! It was too sad. Forgetting you loved someone. And for Harry who lost so many people he loved. So I'm basically going to say the rest of it was brilliant, and ignore the epilogue. I really loved everything else though.
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/15
God she drives me nuts, I have to keep telling myself - Female. Teenager mind - all the time.
Truly I find her really difficult to deal with, a true person I would simply look at for a second, shake my head and move on like kind of person.
Alright so far, dosnt seem to have any substance yet, seems like a Daphne documentary sort of, which tend to include snide, nonsensical remarks in her head, and abs.
Of course Im not far into yet, fairly sure shes gonna grow up a tad more before the story is over.
| Squarekiddo chapter 1 . 8/15
Didnt like Daphne, not did I dislike her, however i found it almost impossible for this Daphne to get with Harry.
therefore the only conclusion I can draw is... well read, should be rather interesting, I cant see it, but you clearly did, so im hoping for a fun ride.