Im sorry, I can't. I just can't. I mean its good but i just can't stomach on why would Daphne just jump on someone after spite like hayst... Anyways i just cant

You know what, fuck you for this stupid ass ending.

Great story, i was really enjoying it but the ending just didn’t fit, the epilogue just left a bad taste in my mouth.
Felt like i was in the clouds then had the most annoying crash. Would be perfect with a different ending, one that actually makes sensw

The last 4 chapters make no fucking sense. Snape just lets Harry die and screw all the horcruxes, Daphne dies/loses her memory stupidly and pointlessly. Everything is very bad, the epilogues are not understood, it is not known what point of view they are from. A shame because he had managed to get the fic out of the way.

It's incredible that it takes a lucky potion for Harry to finally make it to third base with Daphne... XD

This fic was really a waste of time... I came expecting a "pureblood princess" and finds a hormonal troubled teenager... but what I hate most about this fic is seeing everything from Daphne's perspective to finally glimpse a ridiculous version of Harry to the point of abandoning Daphne... this definitely sucks as a romance.

I'm sorry, I tried, I really did. But I just can't find myself caring at all about this version of Daphne. There's nothing really happening, other than a series of "day-in-the-life" snippets, which is a common trap to fall into when writing about one of the ancillary characters - nothing happens to them in the books, so it takes some significant effort to make something happen to them in fanfic, without completely breaking canon.

This is supremely boring. Its a story about a spoild girl, who i get it dosent want to be involved in a war. But she closes her eyes to the actual horror that surrounds her and that most of the parents of her friends a criminals. It makes her seem like a vapid narcissist. I mean how can she not see how such a small world will be effected by a war. In the end i couldnt make it past the 2nd chapter she is too boring of a character and her motivation is very uninteresting.

So perfect

What daphne says about that book really stuck with me... I feel there is a lot more going on around her than she realizes lol

It was a really good story - up until the Epilogues. They destroyed it.

I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work.

Kind of weird. Has Daphne never heard of using the floo to visit friends not in London? This whole chapter is trying too hard to make Daphne and her pureblood family seem just like muggles in their lifestyle. No reason is given and it makes little sense.

I literally felt like I was reading a vlog. Lol

Alright, this was a fantastic book. My only complaint, and funnily enough, I had a similar complaint about the manwha series solo leveling, as it has a veryyy similar epilogue thematically, is that we never get to see Daphne’s memories get restored, or see her reaction to reading the book, which I feel may have been a pretty profound scene had it been implemented, as you can see how much of a toll it took on Harry. Seeing daphne realize her past, the bond between the two of them that could’ve formed in that scene wouldve been quite emotional and I would’ve loved to see it. Regardless, that was the only issue, and the rest of the book was practically flawless. 9.9/10 lmao