Sweet one shot. Sad to see Grandma Dees review she will be missed in this fandom. Bella was a naughty princess but weren’t we all at one time.

Sometimes I like to revisit old stories just to be reminded how many talented authors we have in our community! You being extraordinary in your talents! Love you BB!

Naughtily ever after... what a great way to live! Great story, thanks for writing and sharing!

Ohhh, my beautiful Temptress, I don't know how I never read this one. I saw it on my TBR list today and said, I'm reading that right now!" *Giggles*
I loved this schmexy, seductive, erotic yet incredibly romantic story! *Sighs* You made my day. Honey Bunny, with your fantastic character development, brilliant descriptive setting (I'm pretty sure, I've been to their kingdom, by the way! *winks*) and unique storyline! I had a great time.
Love and miss you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}
-Dee (FangirlinGranma)

beautifully written, so happy l decided to search the original version 3

Becca! I loved this entire story. I love love love that he found someone to share his observational method with. ;) And that he fully sawher for the first time when she saved him. It's all too damn good and the cherry (no snickering!) on top was E referring to his dagger! The best! I really thought I had read this before, but there's no way I wouldn't have remember it if I had because I really loved it. (And that's coming from someone who LOVES to read voyeur scenes, but almost all of them fall flat for me. js)

I think I might have just left you an anon review. It said post review as twilly, but then it made me log in to add to to my read list, and it didn't show up in my recent review list. So, if you just got an anon about how much I love the word "dagger" and voyeur scenes, that was me. :)

Love this sexy one shot.

Loved that he caught her with her hand up her dress! So freaking fantastic, that she was watching the live action and getting so excited. Loved that he found that so arousing and brought her back for more . . . getting her off . . . then caving in to her desires and getting himself off as well. Perfect pair, these two. Very fun.

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Please continue this sexy story!

Sweet Baby Buddah *fanning herself* ... That was one hot hot hot one-shot (wow nice, alliterations AND rhymes!) ;)
I really liked the combination of pure innocence and instinctive naughtiness of this plot.
But this is why I always favour multi-chapter stories: I always feel cheated at the end of one-shots LOL... I want to know more about them and their delightfully kinky pleasure!
Anyway, that's another job very well done dear Becca! Congratulations and thank you for sharing. Until next time. Cheers, Cecile.

This was super hot, I loved it!

Damnnnn this was so fucking hot ! :D

I loved the naughty couple ;) Great job!