Reviews for The Means to an End
BunnyTheGrandSorcerer chapter 1 . 11/16
GREAT! Keep the amazing work up.
evakparra chapter 1 . 10/29
That was a fun read
willam and jack and jake chapter 1 . 10/24
nice love it
HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 1 . 10/8
Ha ha!
bloodkillsgaming chapter 1 . 9/25
God that was so funny and amazing and I loved the Harmony side to it
ITWASCUTE chapter 1 . 9/25
It was cookbook shweeeeeeet!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/11
You are my favorite author by far!
Ice Demon Ranger chapter 1 . 7/7
Funny! I do wonder just what Ron and Ginny will do once they wake up?
Blazeb79 chapter 1 . 5/9
This is the start of a great story but its also a fun oneshot
SithLordNilis chapter 1 . 3/22
FUCKING DAMN IT PLEASE CONTINUE also sorry for swearing I can hardly stop
doc boy chapter 1 . 1/26
Sorry buddy but this was not cool. Harry would never do those kind of things even under the influence. And I think Hermione's reaction to is behavior was unrealistic and making Ron act like that and call Hermione a whore is way out of character for any of them. I may not be all that happy that Harry ended me with Jinny but she's still a sweet, kind and gentle natured character and it makes me sad to see her act like that. So yeah... it wasn't that good. I know we all tend to write our stories a little of out character every now and then and it happens to the best of us; but going that low is a bit much. I wouldn't advice you to give up comedy though. You seem to have the ability to write decent comedy, but I don't think this was the right choice. My advice to you is to try to make your jokes a little more subtle and try to hide the exposition a little bit. Like instead of having Jinny openly say in the passing that she likes Harry while trying to seduce him, try to build up to that piece of information and sort of reveal subtly, or in the passing (subtly) once there's a basis to it, or imply it. It makes the reveal feel a little more natural. If you still want to be goofy, try doing it without making our favorites charterers look like cruel monsters.
Good luck.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/23
This was great lol! I guess Ron was the one in all the arguments with Harry in this universe, not Hermione, -!: Hermione never liked Ron
bugvanilla chapter 1 . 11/17/2016
Love it
Harley G. Potter chapter 1 . 11/5/2016
God no you are not going to stick with drama and angst you are more than amazing at humor i tried not to laugh but this is so halaris (or how ever you spell it) do more humor plz and if you do any other one plz say my name
Harley G. Potter
My life is as bad as Harry's plz.
ainokea2810 chapter 1 . 10/6/2016
So funny!
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