Really enjoying this story. Been unsure of reading this for a very long time. But after reading it this far, it has been really worth while. Good funny stuff and look forward to reading the rest of it and see how it works out.

Uhg, you had to make Beast Boy furry? Why? He isn't furry, and it's gross.

This story was amazing! Truly loved every chapter and every detail. I love the original and creative plot. The building of the relationship between Garfield and Raven and how it was slow and meaningful. You just didn't throw them into their relationship. You're a gifted author and I can't wait to read your work. I loved , loved, absolutely loved this story and I can't wait to read the sequel. I loved the use of Control Freak and how he was given the honorary titan status, hope he doesn't screw up and get it taken from him, it was incredibly kind of them to do that (considering he was their "nemesis"). He was just a geeky fanboy and I love that he shipped Raven and Garfield. The idea of a hero from the prophecy turning evil (not just that but considering she's from a family with generations of heroes) was great, instead of saving the world she was going to rule it haha too funny. I have to say that you certainly are one of my top favorite authors on the site. I know you were talking about doing the novel for national novel writing month, but I would certainly read it if I got the title. Like I said previously you are a gifted writer and continue to shine with each story. Not only are your stories well written with multiple literary devices, you also have a gift with grasping the readers attention. I couldn't put this down and I finished it the day I started( would have been earlier if I never had all the distractions cleaning, babysitting, etc.) Thank you for this amazing story and I can't wait to read the sequel when they go to Mexico. I will certainly be reading your Descendents stories. I look forward to reading more stories. Hope you enjoyed reading my comment because I enjoyed writing it haha. Well I wish you luck with college and your stories.
-Best wishes A New Fan

Okay so I normally review as the end no matter the length of the story so I have opinion, but I have to say I love this story so far! It's amazing and I just can't stop reading. You're a phenomenal author and I can't wait to read any other stories you have. Super excited I'll make sure to review again soon.

O_O oooooh shiz just got real

*eating a bowl of popcorn with wide eyes* "Dis ish shoo gud," I say with my mouth full.

Go BB!

Loved it

Hey there Soulfulbard!

I absolutely loved this story ( I am a little biased towards stories with dragons in them xD). I prefer stories with just enough romance to keep me interested but with an amazing storyline to keep it all in place. Great job with this story and can't wait to read your next one! C:

good chapter.

nice chapter!

sorry about the lack of reviewing on my part.i just kept on pressing "next chapter".

anybody want a peanut?

This is one of the only fan fictions I have finishes and gone back to reread! Absolutely incredible! Everyone is completely in charector, the OC works BRILLIANTLY, it was paced well, and the final act was epic enough, AND the plan was done exactly right! This story scores over several episodes in the actually cartoon, tying with most of its season finales (Not quite the end, but you cant really match A demon coming back to destroy the fabric reality. Though I pl;an on doing that when I get to re wright Demons Run in my Alternate Doctor Who series.) Are you a professional writer? You have a talent for this!

Perfect. And that is NOT a word to throw around lightly!
I don't know where to start: BB's finesse in using animal forms for combat, Having Cyborg written to a tee? The gorgeously scripted romance? Honestly I can find no fault with this story. It's beautifully written, intelligent, hilarious and one of the scenes with Bb and Raen had me fist pumping in public. I could go on and on but i think I'll just stamp it with something I've only given one other series on this site. A flawless 10/10! Fantastic job!