|Reviews for What Grows In Deception|
| Krusher chapter 4 . 3/5
Uhg, you had to make Beast Boy furry? Why? He isn't furry, and it's gross.
| Guest chapter 39 . 10/4/2015
This story was amazing! Truly loved every chapter and every detail. I love the original and creative plot. The building of the relationship between Garfield and Raven and how it was slow and meaningful. You just didn't throw them into their relationship. You're a gifted author and I can't wait to read your work. I loved , loved, absolutely loved this story and I can't wait to read the sequel. I loved the use of Control Freak and how he was given the honorary titan status, hope he doesn't screw up and get it taken from him, it was incredibly kind of them to do that (considering he was their "nemesis"). He was just a geeky fanboy and I love that he shipped Raven and Garfield. The idea of a hero from the prophecy turning evil (not just that but considering she's from a family with generations of heroes) was great, instead of saving the world she was going to rule it haha too funny. I have to say that you certainly are one of my top favorite authors on the site. I know you were talking about doing the novel for national novel writing month, but I would certainly read it if I got the title. Like I said previously you are a gifted writer and continue to shine with each story. Not only are your stories well written with multiple literary devices, you also have a gift with grasping the readers attention. I couldn't put this down and I finished it the day I started( would have been earlier if I never had all the distractions cleaning, babysitting, etc.) Thank you for this amazing story and I can't wait to read the sequel when they go to Mexico. I will certainly be reading your Descendents stories. I look forward to reading more stories. Hope you enjoyed reading my comment because I enjoyed writing it haha. Well I wish you luck with college and your stories.
-Best wishes A New Fan
| Guest chapter 17 . 10/4/2015
Okay so I normally review as the end no matter the length of the story so I have opinion, but I have to say I love this story so far! It's amazing and I just can't stop reading. You're a phenomenal author and I can't wait to read any other stories you have. Super excited I'll make sure to review again soon.
| Lala chapter 30 . 3/22/2015
O_O oooooh shiz just got real
| lala chapter 27 . 3/22/2015
*eating a bowl of popcorn with wide eyes* "Dis ish shoo gud," I say with my mouth full.
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| Noyoushutup chapter 39 . 9/23/2013
Hey there Soulfulbard!
I absolutely loved this story ( I am a little biased towards stories with dragons in them xD). I prefer stories with just enough romance to keep me interested but with an amazing storyline to keep it all in place. Great job with this story and can't wait to read your next one! C:
| iamking chapter 20 . 6/10/2013
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| iamking chapter 16 . 6/10/2013
sorry about the lack of reviewing on my part.i just kept on pressing "next chapter".
| iamking chapter 8 . 6/10/2013
anybody want a peanut?
| fedorasarecool chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
This is one of the only fan fictions I have finishes and gone back to reread! Absolutely incredible! Everyone is completely in charector, the OC works BRILLIANTLY, it was paced well, and the final act was epic enough, AND the plan was done exactly right! This story scores over several episodes in the actually cartoon, tying with most of its season finales (Not quite the end, but you cant really match A demon coming back to destroy the fabric reality. Though I pl;an on doing that when I get to re wright Demons Run in my Alternate Doctor Who series.) Are you a professional writer? You have a talent for this!
| TheScribeSizer chapter 39 . 7/25/2012
Perfect. And that is NOT a word to throw around lightly!
I don't know where to start: BB's finesse in using animal forms for combat, Having Cyborg written to a tee? The gorgeously scripted romance? Honestly I can find no fault with this story. It's beautifully written, intelligent, hilarious and one of the scenes with Bb and Raen had me fist pumping in public. I could go on and on but i think I'll just stamp it with something I've only given one other series on this site. A flawless 10/10! Fantastic job!
| Mr. Atrocious chapter 39 . 7/17/2012
That was a good ride, but I'm not sure if I'll check out the sequel or not. Either way, this was a very entertaining ride that I thought might benefited from more even pacing and more focus on the romance. I love how you let it grow organically, and besides a few parts I found most of it believable, but I just think it could have used a bit more attention than just those small awkward conversations sprinkled here and there that are inevitably interrupted by the plot. I also liked the way it ended, but it just didn't feel quite right.
Anyway, that was marvelous for your first fic, and I think you've obviously had more practice than the typical teen girl fluff writers on here. Not bashing them, but they usually don't know how to get me emotionally involved in what they write, and their stories usually drive me crazy. Good luck to your future works and your original fiction!