Reviews for Presidential Initiation
Zo One chapter 11 . 7/16/2012
Oh my goshhhh! This was so funny! xD At first I wasn't sure if I liked the President in this, but he was easy to warm up to after he punched America in the face haha.

I think at the beginning you meant 'forest' instead of 'forrest'. (Because isn't Forrest a name? I kept thinking Forrest Gump the whole time 'orz)

Anyway! Thank you for the laughs! Onto the next. :U
Seqka711 chapter 11 . 7/13/2012
this story is hilarious! I bet the Queen would get SO pissed at England if he went streaking! :)
so totally (poland) going in my fave!
IcarusWing chapter 11 . 7/4/2012
Oh my goodness gracious... That was the one of the most amazing fics I've ever read, and I've read a lot of amazing fics. XD You should so do a one shot on England's affair with the first lady... Or about England getting drunk and streaking through London. Either one works. XD
Guest chapter 2 . 7/3/2012
AMERICA. SUNG. FRIDAY. Cannot be beaten.
TheNumber1Hero chapter 11 . 6/11/2012
Wow this was a great story. I found almost no spelling errors and grammar mistakes. I also thought you did America beautifully. I'm impressed even though you said you were bad at other characters I thought you did all the nations very well. I especially loved how you did France. Oh, and I can't keep Tony out of this review can I? I loved how you tried to have Canada explain Tony's weird cussing language and how America could understand it. I also very much liked the history element you brought into the story by adding the President's book of secrets. I thought that was a brilliant idea. I want to tell you that I love this story and after I finish writing this review I'm going to your profile to look at your other stories. Keep up the good work and please keep writing.
Michigan chapter 4 . 5/23/2012
I'd bet something on Russia somehow being in here, but every time I do bet, it's Toledo. No wonder I can't hang onto that city for more than a few hours at a time...
P. Cottontail chapter 11 . 5/8/2012
Ha, wow. I totally should've done this earlier, but I haven't checked my e-mail in a LONG time.

Well then, super-belated congratulations! This story split my side all the way through! You are awesome!
Oniongrass chapter 11 . 4/28/2012
This was pretty awesome! Also, on this day this story is officially a year and a day old (from the published date), so happy er...um...whatever it's called.
WillowBlueJay17 chapter 11 . 4/19/2012
This story was beyond funny! Loved it!
La'Rae and Ninjas Incorporated chapter 2 . 4/16/2012
Dude! update this is hilarious !
Kitty-Kat Allie chapter 11 . 4/12/2012
OH WOW! I loved this! I laughed through every chapter! I LOVED all the characters! You captured them all beautifully! I was so happy the BTT made it! Spain is my very favorite and you portrayed him (and Romano wb) so well!

I loved watching Mr. President slowly come to grips with the impossible. Iggy-Fangirl-First-Lady made me lol! I think if a whole room full of handsome men told me they were NPPs, I would believe them, too. Just because if that's what they want to believe, why should I stop them? XD

Also. Alfred's middle name. Foster. At first, I was like "Whut? Why not Franklin? Isn't that the usual one?" And then I thought of something. You wouldn't happen to be Californian, would you? Oh, wait, no, your profile says Illinois, but have you heard of Foster Freeze by any chance? Because it's an ice cream and burger joint and I was wondering if that's where you got his name from. If you did, I totally approve. w If not, that's an amazing coincidence and I love it anyway!

There were a few typos here and there, but nothing that made me outright wince, so eh. *shrug* The story was too awesome for me to even remember examples.

I can't wait to read your USUK. I love well-written ones, so I can shove them in my FrUK loving friends' faces and be like "LOOK, LOOK! WE AREN'T ALL WEEABOOS!"
Violet911 chapter 11 . 3/27/2012
One of the best stories I have ever read.
perfectioninmypride chapter 11 . 3/26/2012
Amazing! So cute :D

/Wishes to know more about this incident with France and the beret...
ThenSheFlew chapter 11 . 3/15/2012
This story was absolutely amazing. I loved it!
StayGood chapter 2 . 3/11/2012
Okay so unless I'm updated properly I usually don't comment until I'm on the latest chapter...

But I HAD to review this one!

You gave Alfred so much friggin character it's making me cry, seriously it's like Himaruya himself did his for you! Just had to say that
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