Reviews for Presidential Initiation
Keith the Evil Dark Lord chapter 3 . 8/2/2015
Called it.
But punching someone always leads to a wonderful friendship, trust me... Maybe America and Mr. bitchy should try the punching too
... Or whatever the flailing fists thing is. That works too
Surprise, Mr. President. Your kidnapper is freaking amazing
Keith the Evil Dark Lord chapter 2 . 8/2/2015
And I had every right to be worried! He sung Friday to the President! Poor man...
Poor, poor dude. Come on America, it's his first day!
He's so going to punch him anyways lol
Keith the Evil Dark Lord chapter 1 . 8/2/2015
Omg, Alfred what are you about to discuss? Why am I so worried? I'm actually freaking out with excitement about this story, no joke
Guest chapter 11 . 7/26/2015
"Well, Alfred blew up the Washington Monument again," XD. So funny
Pandyisapanda chapter 11 . 7/13/2015
This was a great end! Loved this very much!
The-Majestic-Radish chapter 4 . 7/12/2015
This story is abolitely brilliant! I have been in tears from laughing at how ridicoulous this entire scene is.

You are very clever.
ApplePajama chapter 11 . 5/14/2015
Well, I have to agree that it wasn't the most exciting epilogue, but I don't think any other epilogues could have satisfied the story. I mean, with all the craziness that the President had to face, an uneventful ending is good enough to justify the story.
Guest chapter 11 . 4/24/2015
That was really cute!
FireFox Vixen chapter 11 . 4/3/2015
Love!

I rarely laugh but this made me laugh alot.

I can actaully see this happening
Harmonic Bunny chapter 8 . 3/20/2015
Ahhh this is so funny. xD Poor President, really.
I'm continuing later; its 1AM. Uhm.
Mekayla chapter 1 . 3/6/2015
That last sentence tho "!et the fun begin" freaking creepy
221bdeductions chapter 6 . 2/18/2015
Lol. I love this story! It's sop funny and well written!
Missingwings chapter 11 . 2/15/2015
Lol, I would want to become president just for this. Awesome job, this was great!
Rising from the Ashes YOLT chapter 11 . 2/13/2015
Typical typical Alfred!
Rachel chapter 1 . 2/7/2015
THIS IS MY NEW FAVORITE THING
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