|Reviews for Mr Blue Sky|
| akatrixie chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
Love that song! Ahhh!
| ihavedeletedeverythingherebye chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
I really like the idea, but I'm a little tiny bit confused- the transitions are slightly awkward. I really like the juice idea, though, and the whole entire summer theme- I don't think that there have been many Summer themed stories about the Warblers written at all.
I really like your descriptions, and how much vocabulary you use- it's really uncommon to find something that does that on this site. The only concern I have is that the writing doesn't really flow well, it's very awkward in places. But that's not uncommon- even I have problems with it!
Well, anyway, I loved it- please keep writing! I'd love to see more Klaine stories from you. :)