Reviews for Mary Sue Alliance
ayleid chapter 1 . 9/20/2016
This needs to be continued. It's a witty compendium of noodle incidents and tropes, well-written and funny.
Beyond that, it should be required reading for all fanfiction authors. It is full of wisdom instrumental in avoiding the pitfalls of Suedom. I especially like the line about normal folk getting superpowers being a recipe for chaos, a great guideline to understand a number of works. I also liked the emphasis on how the main Naruto himself was also a Sue with the usual flaws: chronic boredom, disregard for authority, etc.

Also, I need to read more about Magical Girl Hinata. I did not previously know I needed it, but it sounds incredibly awesome, and very cute.
thebicky chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
Sarcasm Dragon chapter 1 . 8/16/2014
Nice setup. The challenge would be continuing it as a parody rather than the whole thing devolving into an actual Naruto-sue story as the last few paragraphs started to seem to be.
Keeper of the Infinite Library chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
Oh dear God please update this! ... please?
1000Nachts chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
I'm...surprised. This is, by its own very definition, a Sue fic. They are predisposed to being broken and eventually lifeless stories. But you wrote this chapter well and I believe this story has the possibility to actually succeed, if continued. Bravo sir, bravo.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
showstopper573 chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
hallarious 3
Guest chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Hilarious. It's funny how the most due characters always have incredibly boring and stupid fights. You're totally right about not being optimized, or collecting
dayfox96 chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
This is a work of fucking beauty
adrogoz chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Love the concept, but I am a little confused about the Haxxor rating system. Why do you randomly go into three decimal points sometimes? It's a little pointless when they're all zeros
Wolka chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
pretty funny so far
madnessman chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
okay dude you gotta continue this even if it's just a side project. just to say in my opinion it's one of those it's somewhat annoying but a good time waster and please don't take this personally (because I seem to have trouble enjoying fanfiction now adays, seriosly it sucks) but it is something that is only good if your really bored but please continue I actually enjoyed reading the beginning of that and just continued so keep updating dude
uo-chou chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
Hilarious! I hope you decide to keep writing this. :)
Lord Sia chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
... I can see that working. Keep it coming.
prudiisten chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
This is good. Hope to see more soon.
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