Reviews for The First World
marf chapter 1 . 6/11
I like it and would like to see more
DMacX chapter 1 . 5/30/2014
Get on with it! :)
Almedha chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
Very cool, sent shivers down my spine at the end. I hope you can continue it someday.
silke f chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
Great first part... please continue...
Reikson chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
Continue this.
thunder18 chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
enjoyed reading this chapter
kingnick104 chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
looks intresting continue
Chris7221 chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
Don't continue this. Not because it's bad, but because it works best as a oneshot.
Tarica chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
Very interesting concept. Please continue!
The Lord Marbury chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
Very interesting first chapter! Please do continue
FireChildSlytherin5 chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
Interesting first chapter.
Babaloo chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
I like the idea behind the story. Please continue writing. Looking forward to seeing where this will go (more discovery, wonders, etc).
CapriceAnn Hedican-Kocur chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
you MUST continue! ! ! loved this chapter! ! ! ! cannot wait for more! ! ! !
scifi-karis chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
I definitely agree with what someone else wrote. It's too short! I would love for you to continue! I enjoy ST/SG crossovers. There aren't enough good ones! Please continue and soon!
Alkeni chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
I'd like to see more of this.
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