Reviews for This Land Is Mine
MariaSchneeWittchen chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
Hi! I'm Spanish but I'm understand English. I have to say this story is a little sad but its full of hope. I love it and its very well written. Best wishes.
FFww2reviewerJC chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
Great job! But since it isn't a FF, I'd recommend putting it on fictionpress, for original writing.