|Reviews for This Land Is Mine|
| meldahlie chapter 4 . 8/15
God bless Israel,
Raise up her name,
Hear our prayer
And bless us.
Bless her leaders,
Bless also the young,
That they may carry the land with patience;
In their youth, bless them...
[to paraphrase the Song of Africa]
| MariaSchneeWittchen chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
Hi! I'm Spanish but I'm understand English. I have to say this story is a little sad but its full of hope. I love it and its very well written. Best wishes.
| FFww2reviewerJC chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
Great job! But since it isn't a FF, I'd recommend putting it on fictionpress, for original writing.